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prophesiah
eternities breath consumes me
I breathe in her air and realize how small I am
I weep for peoples oppressed
can I really make a change?
evil rears its head within me
will I go on from this test?
when I meet the creator
will he say well done?
tears of repentance wash over my spirit
I'm so dark sometimes
I wonder where it comes from
do I stand a chance in this depressed world?
lambs to a slaughter
picked off one by one
thinking no one sees
He does
I don't know the cause of the duress
is it devils in charge making us cringe?
lording it over our minds brainwashing us?
social unrest, plagues we are on the brink
I can feel it
let eyes open of their own accord
do your best to waken
when He speaks the Earth trembles
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Re. prophesiah
20th Jun 2020 5:53am
My warrior woman ;)
You will pass the test with flying colors, heh ❤️
This was a very honest and vulnerable spill... I know you question your worth sometimes, but you're awesome! I loved the conclusion to this one 🙏
You will pass the test with flying colors, heh ❤️
This was a very honest and vulnerable spill... I know you question your worth sometimes, but you're awesome! I loved the conclusion to this one 🙏
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Re: Re. prophesiah
20th Jun 2020 6:28am
thank you graciously dearest NewB for the love here a lot of people have no idea how hard it is for me to post these kind of poems it's a leap of faith after so many years of embracing darkness I cherish you, my friend, for encouraging me on this new path ❤
Re. prophesiah
20th Jun 2020 10:46am
Great expression of reality. Personal attitudes and decisions and then living with them. All the while knowing there’s a greater good called for. We know it’s there but just knowing and not understanding is frustrating. Courageous write!
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Re: Re. prophesiah
20th Jun 2020 10:59am
thank you dearest poet for the love and insight on this write it's out of my comfort zone being such a dark writer for so long but it's on my heart as of late I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤
Re. prophesiah
20th Jun 2020 11:58am
We've all suffered with darkness, wether we are still in it or have come out the other end. The vulnerability you express is beautifully self aware.
Thank you for sharing such a personal write with all of us.
--B
Thank you for sharing such a personal write with all of us.
--B
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Re: Re. prophesiah
20th Jun 2020 12:02pm
thank you beautiful Bonzi for the love on this write it's deeply felt and appreciated ❤
Re. prophesiah
20th Jun 2020 7:08pm
In a world that is full of darkness, I ask myself lately how can be a light?
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Re: Re. prophesiah
21st Jun 2020 2:32pm
hey there dearest Shakespear you are a light already and you shine through your writes and deeds... thank you dear poet for being here ❤
Re. prophesiah
21st Jun 2020 3:13am
We are on the brink, indeed. You are a bright light - keep shining. This is a beautiful, vulnerable write.
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Re: Re. prophesiah
21st Jun 2020 2:33pm
thank you graciously beautiful poetess for such a lovely comment you shine as well 💕
Re. prophesiah
21st Jun 2020 11:55am
You are more stronger than you think for you are a warrior of untold strength respect dear poetess
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Re: Re. prophesiah
21st Jun 2020 2:34pm
thank you graciously dearest Stoney I try fail then get back up again I deeply appreciate your presence here ❤
Re: Re. prophesiah
21st Jun 2020 9:00pm
Re. prophesiah
22nd Jun 2020 6:22pm
Loved the title, it grabbed my attention.
I think the current times are making us more connected and aware of the spirit of brother/sisterhood and love.
"let eyes open of their own accord
do your best to waken" speaks volumes because some will look the other way.
Excellent piece Crimsin.
I think the current times are making us more connected and aware of the spirit of brother/sisterhood and love.
"let eyes open of their own accord
do your best to waken" speaks volumes because some will look the other way.
Excellent piece Crimsin.
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Re: Re. prophesiah
22nd Jun 2020 11:46pm
thank you graciously dearest Wally yes a sense of unity is what I was going for I'm happy this spoke to you 💕
Re. prophesiah
26th Jun 2020 3:51pm
soulful turmoil
humility, graciousness, gratitude, servitude, love of man
concrete poetry dramatic-narrative blend, creative imagery on point
heartfelt subject matter, thought-provoking
Mother Love... TEACH US!!
Love
humility, graciousness, gratitude, servitude, love of man
concrete poetry dramatic-narrative blend, creative imagery on point
heartfelt subject matter, thought-provoking
Mother Love... TEACH US!!
Love
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Re: Re. prophesiah
29th Jun 2020 8:51am
thank you graciously dearest poet for such an awesome critique I truly appreciate you ❤
Re: Re. prophesiah
29th Jun 2020 3:05pm