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Heartfelt Song Of Unabashed Naivete
No I can't tell you why
Too young to stay alive
When the next body falls
Think of the shopping malls
What gives meaning to your life?
How can we bridge this divide?
Another day
Another way
Take My hand
And heal this land
Even if it's only you and I
There's meaning in giving it a try
Don't be afraid to be who you are
Because to me you'll always be a shining star
Too young to stay alive
When the next body falls
Think of the shopping malls
What gives meaning to your life?
How can we bridge this divide?
Another day
Another way
Take My hand
And heal this land
Even if it's only you and I
There's meaning in giving it a try
Don't be afraid to be who you are
Because to me you'll always be a shining star
Published 11th Jun 2020
| Edited 18th Jun 2020
Author's Note
This is a song I wrote, composed and recorded today. Here's the bandcamp, a little better sound than video: https://wordsinger.bandcamp.com/track/heartfelt-song-of-unabashed-naivete-live
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12th Jun 2020 1:20am
Very interesting... The dissonance in the music compliments the mood of the poem well. Though I can't say the music is quite my taste, nicely done!
12th Jun 2020 4:06am
It's the search we all strive for, finding our meaning and purpose in life.
Well written lyrics.
Well written lyrics.
18th Jun 2020 3:26am
Just uploaded a new video version combining live performance of this song with weird synths and beats muhahahhahahaahhahaahahhahahha! I'm still learning. :)
