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A few Maybes and You
stormed today
rain crashed on tin roofs
a thunder rolled
and a couple of lightning
how's your sky
rumbled a little...?
is it grey
a cold day
maybe
woolens and Wellingtons
sou'wester ...socks
I'm in a tunic
stuck on a reason
bogged without vision
just wondering
how's the other side
with a sip of tea
watching the evening sun.
rain crashed on tin roofs
a thunder rolled
and a couple of lightning
how's your sky
rumbled a little...?
is it grey
a cold day
maybe
woolens and Wellingtons
sou'wester ...socks
I'm in a tunic
stuck on a reason
bogged without vision
just wondering
how's the other side
with a sip of tea
watching the evening sun.
Published 6th Jun 2020
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A cryptic Write for You Grace, quite symbolic.
This comes across as very casual and relaxed
Full of heart as always!!!
Beautiful pic and Beautiful flower!!!
This comes across as very casual and relaxed
Full of heart as always!!!
Beautiful pic and Beautiful flower!!!
6th Jun 2020 10:59am
O Cryptic one...now that's something coming from the best of them. Thanks for dropping by and commenting Soul. It rained today.
6th Jun 2020 11:01am
6th Jun 2020 6:57pm
I think it has the kind of sublime contemplation, spirit moving through observations of nature, of a haiku. 💖🙏
6th Jun 2020 9:09pm
Hi Daniel, thank you so much for reading the humble poem. Appreciated as always .
7th Jun 2020 5:55am
I picture a raining day missing your friends. Great poem. Keep on writing.
8th Jun 2020 7:49pm
