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The Unremarkable Man
He threw his soul
over a puddle of tears
he had cried for her,
that way she could
trample every ounce
of his being.
over a puddle of tears
he had cried for her,
that way she could
trample every ounce
of his being.
Published 24th May 2020
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24th May 2020 8:27am
Epic write ... Somehow the pic seems to evoke the spiritual, which enhances the write ... Awesome ... Bless and love ...
24th May 2020 9:18am
Pure poetic gold ... minted right in front of me ... love this dear poetess ...
24th May 2020 9:45am
24th May 2020 11:55am
Intense! The feeling lingers... a deep message conveyed. Another super write Nick. A.
24th May 2020 1:33pm
24th May 2020 3:27pm
24th May 2020 5:34pm
.........I think I know that girl 😭
Pure excellence of Pen
As Always-Wit here tied with heartache ...hell on Earth!!! 😁
Pure excellence of Pen
As Always-Wit here tied with heartache ...hell on Earth!!! 😁
Anonymous
24th May 2020 6:57pm
Wow ! Wow ! Wow !
