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Sheets and Signs
Brain goop seeps into sleep
bringing forth a night sham
kicking around in bed made of granite
left to feel and ponder the
hardness of all things.
bringing forth a night sham
kicking around in bed made of granite
left to feel and ponder the
hardness of all things.
Published 26th May 2020
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26th May 2020 5:39am
26th May 2020 10:12am
Darkness brings the greatest clarity, though that clarity is often muddled by our own mind!. Nice expression of that dilemma Nick...
26th May 2020 10:43am
26th May 2020 11:41am
Very nice metaphor, Nikki. I hate nights such as these, that you feel every lump and bump in a mattress, and many times your own body. Brain goop! Perfect.
Great image too, reminds me of the Twilight Zone or Darkside.
Great image too, reminds me of the Twilight Zone or Darkside.
26th May 2020 6:30pm
Pretty much the same, but lumpy bed and discordant dreams ... Great write and pic ... Bless and love ... .
27th May 2020 5:20pm
haunting pic Nik... & the verses..brilliantly bringing in those darkness hours of hard insipidities, weighing down in their merciless beastliness.. bravo yet again .. the brevity queen!:)
