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Sir
you leave indelible marks on my soul
when you worship at my sacred hollows
pushing in with intensity your greed
in my waking hours I pen love letters
pressed in my diary of secrets
you can not know me here
it is in the sanctuary of need I am sane
pushed every night in your theater of depravity
I succumb to my sin
sanguine on the lips
lies in my whispers
no darling you can't know me
with hushed urgency we plummet
deeper and deeper still into the unraveling
you ravish the night and break the dawn
you claim me utterly with your body and mind
but no you don't know me
not here in my sacred halls of knowing
where I write poetry to your cock
and fuck your soul
no Sir you don't know me
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Re: Re. Sir
12th May 2020 9:21pm
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Re: Re. Sir
12th May 2020 10:19pm
thank you graciously dearest Me... I'm happy you felt this one... I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤
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Anonymous
12th May 2020 10:38pm
DDAAYYUUMMMM

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Re: Re. Sir
12th May 2020 10:40pm
hey there dearest Ragnar giggles I'm so happy you liked this... have a beautiful day today ❤
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20th May 2020 9:11pm
Re. Sir
12th May 2020 11:48pm
Damn girl. I now to the. And all I can say is, I he doesn’t know you, I’d be terrified to knsonyou. There is a fierce and woman there.
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Re: Re. Sir
20th May 2020 9:13pm
thank you graciously beautiful Julia my apologies on this late reply just a bit of depression in the way... I love how you see me in this write ❤ I cherish your thoughts...
Re. Sir
13th May 2020 4:42am
Oh my. Had to have a sip of water after reading that. Sensual reflection of the complexity of humans. Liked it!
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Re: Re. Sir
20th May 2020 9:13pm
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20th May 2020 9:14pm
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20th May 2020 9:15pm
Re. Sir
13th May 2020 11:42am
Re: Re. Sir
20th May 2020 9:16pm
thank you dearest Tender One so true yes I suspect you are correct with that thought I deeply appreciate your thoughts here ❤
Re. Sir
13th May 2020 12:31pm
Wow truth spoken for he doesn't know you like he thinks he do for we only show that which we want you to see as our mind and spiritual soul without revealing the depth of our heart that hides within the mere depth of our inner being nicely composed dear poetess..respect
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Re: Re. Sir
20th May 2020 9:17pm
thank you graciously dearest Stoney I love the wisdom you shared from this read... I cherish your visits ❤
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21st May 2020 12:28pm
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13th May 2020 4:05pm
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Re: Re. Sir
20th May 2020 9:17pm
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13th May 2020 7:43pm
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20th May 2020 9:18pm
Re. Sir
14th May 2020 2:19am
Depth of the lust
that desires the earning
to capture the elusive
Creation of ones own mind
Beautiful
that desires the earning
to capture the elusive
Creation of ones own mind
Beautiful
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Re: Re. Sir
20th May 2020 9:19pm
thank you dearest Soul I love your poetic thoughts on this my apologies on my late response life just gets in the way sometimes I deeply appreciate your visits ❤
Re. Sir
15th May 2020 8:02pm
I'm floored by the way this was penned. "theater of depravity" basically described what's at the core of lust and desire.
Brilliant piece.
Brilliant piece.
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Re: Re. Sir
20th May 2020 9:21pm
aw I'm deeply honored dearest Wally that my write had that effect makes me smile wide ❤
Re. Sir
26th May 2020 5:00am
Yours is the testimony of the sacred feminine as she appears cloaked in light, illuminating every texture of the grotto. Well done Crimsin. The sun dances in the sky over our heads, our mouths gaping. Count me among the other shepherds gathered to witness.
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