~the converse of everything

ssstttrrreeeaaammmssss. You are well suited to SOC and turn me into a word archaeologist.  Love me x

archeologist!.. dig' em more doodah ;) Love ev xx

Converse has a curiously distinct definition from a word such as opposite. It is more like the dialogue, a short of conversation, but also the opposite of a proposition, depending on usage. That of course has no bearing on your intention, just my musings. When I was saying immutable in my recent write, I was thinking of it as, cannot be silenced, rather than, does not change or transform. I tend to do whatever I want with the words. lol

Your opening stanza is quite potent in creating this sense of spiritual presence. I imagine parallel energies spreading like ripples, blooming life and in loving reflection. In your second stanza I am reminded of the tree of life, which is sometimes depicted as growing down from the sky, inverted. Your third stanza is the kind of alchemy I have come to love in your writing, to take the essence of a kiss to such a natural depth, the image of the doe nuzzling the icy forest floor, it springs to living motion before the minds eye. That is such an amazing quality of truly insightful writing. Living dimensions are imbued by spirit, birthed onto the page. I was also given pause when I considered the concept of karma back. It is an organic comparison that I've never seen made before. The closing stanzas seem quite literally a kind of alchemy. The various essences bottled, a kind of soulful gathering into yourself of the beauty of other, the living embodiment of love. The single lines have terrific presence and impact. I really adored considering everything you might be saying with this.

you are 'THE' poet in DU .. who inspire one in the reads & such reflections.. which is a mesmerize.. & a poetry  you spill from your deconstructs & an elevated feltness .. I adore your truth of Poetry you art like no other, your genuine reads & comments, your warmth in the bonding, your that childish innocence i feel in the honesty, curiosity, creativity, daring efforts,  smiling dispositions & the truth ev.. I am in soulful gratitudes to your presence ev in my life's spacetime & beyond , Daniel.. Light & Love ev :) x

This is absolutely gorgeous. In awe as always.

Now, this is unbelievable.. you are my assumed guru & the so~ benchmark of Viz poetics .. by your extremely explorative & stunning  Viz you do dear Nomoth... this your words is like a nod that i had done some bit right .. I ever learn & grasp from the Guru;) Light & Love ev, my adored Poet :)

Unbelievably beautiful piece Uma absolutely awesome always In awe of your ability to articulate and poetical prowess amazing 👏🙌🙌

Hunter Soul Poet.. you yourself an amazing soul & fluent poet  of spiritual depths .. Gratitudes Ev dear .. Shine On, Light & Love :)

WOW! The poem cleaves...pushes and pulls at the soul as you read each delectable line Uma...just beautiful.
Cheers...Harry

Harry, I love your reflections that you do by your sharp poetic eyes ev..  I indeed agree, that not all poems aligns in such ways that is effectual & expressive at both ends - the   poet & the reader..  some  come close to this.. we only are the in trying ever... in the divine channeling medium we are tasked with.. I dunn know what I say now lol;) Gratitudes ev dear H, Light & Love :)

The alliteration and rhythm pattern is gorgeous throughout as are the Visuals. Bravo in PoM. This is superb, you so deserve it. X

This coming from the Seasoned Adored beautiful Soul Poetess.. DU is missing your art & presence already P.. Come back well dear, Light & Love :) xx

As always it's a piece full of depth
Well all that is left to be said is thought provoking
In order to be truly appreciative of this one it is best not to only read it once
There's always this hidden meaning that is a perilous search that bears no reward in the end as it is undiscovered

Awwe Laluma.. you proved the essence & the 'undefining infinitness' definition of poetry.. when you say.."There's always this hidden meaning that is a perilous search that bears no reward in the end as it is undiscovered'.. in awe of your reads & presence & words.. Hoping to read your works sooner , Light & Love :)  

Wow, just amazing.

Thank you KristinaX, for the read & follow. Welcome to DU & hope you have fine poeting here.. Light & Love :)