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Parts And Path
leaves spiral by branch
winding hillside with random sprig
to those full open with white-striped vein
mark to trails entrance speaking home
voice to the voiceless sing from trees
spoken in wind, rustle and leaf
feather downs whistle for absent mother
padded paws chatter, chase and tumble
wilds we in Nature combine serenity
salve, balm, stroked and beloved
mired together, combing soft grasses
inhales of moisture letting oak permeate
pink swirls dipped in red blending blue sky
playing gateway for red-tailed hawks, stratus and robins
two troves interconnect lapping with wave
slapping-back at ocher banks these grey waters flow
mothers tongue lulls, embraced by the cradle
wrap thy arms secure to breast and bone
placed inside your rib-cage thumps the beat
my perked ear attentive can hear both ventricles
Published 6th May 2020
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Anonymous
6th May 2020 00:47am
Gorgeous imagery, really loved it. Makes me think of the mountains, home, the forest, ...
6th May 2020 00:53am
Great to see You here!!!
Ahhh so glad I could give You thoughts to home-Nature I could never live without its touch!!!
Ahhh so glad I could give You thoughts to home-Nature I could never live without its touch!!!
6th May 2020 1:13am
My goodness, you have absolutely melted me with your gorgeous he(art)!!!
I'm amazed by your work... It's as if you were speaking to my soul, good man! Are you sure you aren't a painter? 😛 I was ecstatic to see a couple of uploads from you, and was not disappointed with this one!! Headed now to get a taste of those strawberries! 😁
I'm amazed by your work... It's as if you were speaking to my soul, good man! Are you sure you aren't a painter? 😛 I was ecstatic to see a couple of uploads from you, and was not disappointed with this one!! Headed now to get a taste of those strawberries! 😁
6th May 2020 1:24am
Ha I paint like a child You should see it NB ...hell I fuck up stick figures.
Glad I could paint something here, thank You for Your kindness I am honored You like it and that RL geesh You're Awesome!!!
Glad I could paint something here, thank You for Your kindness I am honored You like it and that RL geesh You're Awesome!!!
6th May 2020 1:42am
Breathtaking, you are literally painting a picture with words instead of brush stokes. So so beautifully captivating. You have an exquisite talent.
6th May 2020 1:58am
Awww You are so very kind-too kind
Appreciate You yet again for visiting!!!
These types of Writes are my crutch lol
Appreciate You yet again for visiting!!!
These types of Writes are my crutch lol
Soul..Dear Friend...
With this piece, You take readers on a delicately beautiful, scenic ramble into the woods! Thru your vivid imagery, and precise auditory descriptions, i feel as if i am one with Nature herself....like You, feeling my own heart-beats synchronized with Hers! This one re-awakens nostalgic emotions--deep within my core!
A Soothing Scribe! <3
With this piece, You take readers on a delicately beautiful, scenic ramble into the woods! Thru your vivid imagery, and precise auditory descriptions, i feel as if i am one with Nature herself....like You, feeling my own heart-beats synchronized with Hers! This one re-awakens nostalgic emotions--deep within my core!
A Soothing Scribe! <3
7th May 2020 10:34am
Thank You for feeling me DE and Mumma N's magic!!!
She wakes slow yest gaining speed, ready to pour out well She is!!!
To immerse oneself within her space is such gift, from catching just a glimpse to full immersion...any taste is pure greatness!!!
Thank You for enjoying my little wandering.
She wakes slow yest gaining speed, ready to pour out well She is!!!
To immerse oneself within her space is such gift, from catching just a glimpse to full immersion...any taste is pure greatness!!!
Thank You for enjoying my little wandering.
7th May 2020 4:48am
These last few weeks, weve been cleaning up the back 40 in ur yard.Its technically not our property, however we still have to look at it. (owner ones a lot of acreage and is like 90+) anyways, its looks great and I put some feeders out there for the critters. We call it "Critterville" I LOVE it! I did have a point...while reading this, it took me right there with my critters, the sounds the calm... I love this and you!
7th May 2020 10:39am
I'm so glad this connected Your magic of home with mine ML!!!
Stoked that You are able to get Your natural surroundings the way You want and can connect with.
Here I am blessed with a bit of many Natures creatures...critters to creatures.
So the fact You have visitors around...I understand the blessing.
Name them and they will feel You, return to You often.
Soak Your woods in slow and thus make time move in just the same manner.
Take care of one another-It is greatness that You are.
Thank You for being here and the kindness of Your RL!!!
Stoked that You are able to get Your natural surroundings the way You want and can connect with.
Here I am blessed with a bit of many Natures creatures...critters to creatures.
So the fact You have visitors around...I understand the blessing.
Name them and they will feel You, return to You often.
Soak Your woods in slow and thus make time move in just the same manner.
Take care of one another-It is greatness that You are.
Thank You for being here and the kindness of Your RL!!!
7th May 2020 2:06pm
It is definitely a true a blessing. Something I wanted to do for a long time. Allowing myself to accept all the dark thats happened in my life, and renewing the light has been the most rewarding! It took a while, yet here I am! hugs and love babe! <3 (I am looking out there right now whilst having my am java)
I am so taken with this imagery and the care and obvious sense of joy that was taken in being submerged, experiencing nature as well as writing about it. The depth of feeling is so very touching and the wording used is incredibly inspirational in a way where my heart and soul ache in pure gratitude. I connect to this poem, completely. It's yet another writing that I feel honoured and lucky to be able to read as part of a legacy that will live on; like parts of that natural landscape, that was so coveted.
I send my thanks out into.... ✨ 💫 🍃...
🌹 - x
-S
I send my thanks out into.... ✨ 💫 🍃...
🌹 - x
-S
