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JUST A DREAM
You can't really truly understand a book unless you get into the books real contents itself, as it is the mere depth and deepness and spiritual soul of the writers deepest thoughts. That walks through the halls of their mind and heart even the deepness of there soul. For it is there through there eyes of words and imagination, that only uncovers the true depth and truth of your subconsciousness of your own thoughts in truth, that walks through the the halls of your own mind and heart and soul. But yet I've shown you no cover to pages of a book, for even now here I've got your undivided attention in mind and heart and soul, for you've only seen and heard my unspoken words that I speak as a silent voice within the depth of a whisper in pages of a book. Yet unspoken because it's only just a dream in mind, speaking from my heart and soulful spiritual growth of my soul for its just a dream or is it???
Published 18th Apr 2020
Author's Note
IF YOU EVER HAD A DREAM AND YOU TOLD SOMEONE ABOUT THAT DREAM, BUT ALL YOU GOT BACK WAS GOOD LUCK WITH THAT ONE, IT ONLY MEANS HERE IS AN INDIVIDUAL THAT THINKS NEGATIVE THOUGHTS OF THEIR SUBCONSCIOUSNESS OF THE MIND. FOR DID IT EVER ACURRED TO YOU THAT SOMETIMES WE CREATE OWN WORLD. So to tell someone to don't believe within themselves or their dreams nor believe within thyself value and self worth and they are suppose to make a decision base upon your thoughts and walk away. Dreams are for those who believe within the depth and deepness of the dream as their third eye sees.
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18th Apr 2020 9:55pm
dearest Stoney from reading you I have come to understand the deeply spiritual nature of your personality
you have a beautiful soul and adhere to wisdom filled core values I admire that...I fear reaping what I've sewn
I sew some bitter seeds while not in my right mind I pray God takes that into account...I'm making an effort to do right now
it's my hopes that my walk with God will soon be so deeply engrained in me that I won't stray even in mental crisis...
anyway excellent poem I didn't mean to say so much
but that's what you made me think of with the example you set ❤
you have a beautiful soul and adhere to wisdom filled core values I admire that...I fear reaping what I've sewn
I sew some bitter seeds while not in my right mind I pray God takes that into account...I'm making an effort to do right now
it's my hopes that my walk with God will soon be so deeply engrained in me that I won't stray even in mental crisis...
anyway excellent poem I didn't mean to say so much
but that's what you made me think of with the example you set ❤
19th Apr 2020 12:09pm
I truly appreciate your honesty and truth for I know it gets hard at times even for me, when I go through the motions of those trying times mentally but yet what makes us unique as individuals, each has something special to bring to the table of life for we may not be able to control everything in our lives, but yet at least we can make sense of the human side of us and understand, when we get that gut feeling to know that we may or may not have affended anyone, who might take us in the wrong way as it takes a real person to apologize for a mistake and it stems from the depth of the subconsciousness because of that which is constantly changing us on a daily basis, but yet it is that fact that we recognize the changes in us making us to be better as people transcending to a higher level of ourselves that in itself makes us human beings so I truly understand were your coming from dear poetess so don't be so hard on yourself for he sees your heart as well as your spiritual soul...respect dear poetess wink with a sweet smile STONEY223
18th Apr 2020 10:09pm
This one is so you ... the poetic you that I have come to know ... to follow ... wonderful ...
19th Apr 2020 12:18pm
Thank you for the read and commenting and compliment yes this is the me that I am no sugar coating it I have been through so much within my life but yet I regret nothing about how I lived that life for that is what created me into being the man that I am now for it use to be a time when I didn't let anyone get close to me but as in life something will change us from within through the process of opening our eyes and seeing the good within life I had to learn and grow and to understand not everyone is out to hurt you but yet it doesn't mean you don't pay attention to those around you for even the devil comes disguise in human skin...respect dear poetess
20th Apr 2020 8:58am
20th Apr 2020 10:03am
Truth spoken indeed but yet it is easy to uptain by everyone seeking to gain wisdom through believing within thyself respect dear poetess
22nd Apr 2020 3:16pm
I absolutely agree with crim and dragonfly, all of your writes offer us a true glimpse into your soul. Each write posseses a spiritual tone. You are indeed, a man who loves, treasures, thinks and feels deeper than the mere surface level as most. You're a wise man and I'm quite sure, possibly an Earth angel of sorts. ♥️
22nd Apr 2020 5:55pm
Thank you for your read into my soul I truly appreciate your compliment and comment yes I see the world through the beauty of life whether good or bad for in this life we have to sometimes really open up our eyes and not be blinded by what we think life should be for there are demons and angles for as long as there is life there will always be good verse evil somewhere in between we need to find a balance between living life and dying while still trying to have life as the chosen few...respect dear poetess
