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Gone
I can't write anymore
The urge is gone
Lost...
Though... I hope not forever
I used to be able to write
about anything
Any topic, so changeable in style
But now I have...
No thoughts
Nothing but a void
My fingers type
Nothing...
My soul has no feeling
No need, no urge to be filled
Still Nothing...
The place I am in is barren
Desolate, without warmth
Without love
I am nowhere
My minds thoughts
Are about mundane things
Everyday occurrences
I have lost my spark...
I have lost the ability
To see beautiful things
To see the good in people
To put a smile on people's faces
I can't even put a smile on my own...
I am no one
Without meaning
Without hope
Without a purpose
This is not me...
But... Who am I?
The urge is gone
Lost...
Though... I hope not forever
I used to be able to write
about anything
Any topic, so changeable in style
But now I have...
No thoughts
Nothing but a void
My fingers type
Nothing...
My soul has no feeling
No need, no urge to be filled
Still Nothing...
The place I am in is barren
Desolate, without warmth
Without love
I am nowhere
My minds thoughts
Are about mundane things
Everyday occurrences
I have lost my spark...
I have lost the ability
To see beautiful things
To see the good in people
To put a smile on people's faces
I can't even put a smile on my own...
I am no one
Without meaning
Without hope
Without a purpose
This is not me...
But... Who am I?
Published 11th Jan 2012
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11th Jan 2012 2:47pm
A very powerful piece. I can relate to your words. Thank you for sharing your great work!
12th Jan 2012 10:47am
Thank you cherry_blossom,
I am pleased that you like it.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
I am pleased that you like it.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
11th Jan 2012 4:23pm
12th Jan 2012 10:49am
11th Jan 2012 4:26pm
I can sooo relate to this as it has happened to me when my fickle muse abandons me. Outstanding!
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
12th Jan 2012 10:51am
Thanks Gypsy
This is a first for a me, so I am a little lost at the moment.
Thanks for your comment. Greatly appreciated.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
This is a first for a me, so I am a little lost at the moment.
Thanks for your comment. Greatly appreciated.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
11th Jan 2012 7:18pm
Damn, beautiful and sad. We feel like empty bags sometimes.
But you have the precious gift of poetry. What can make us happy or make us cry.
Sometimes it is better to stand still. And let the tears pour forth strong.
"It can not rain" forever as the song says.
But you have the precious gift of poetry. What can make us happy or make us cry.
Sometimes it is better to stand still. And let the tears pour forth strong.
"It can not rain" forever as the song says.
12th Jan 2012 10:56am
Ah Luca,
I read your comment and got to - "and let the tears pour forth strong" and burst into tears. I haven't cried like that for a long time ... Thank you for your kind words, they helped me a lot.... Just feeling a little lost at the moment... I'm sure I will be back soon.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
I read your comment and got to - "and let the tears pour forth strong" and burst into tears. I haven't cried like that for a long time ... Thank you for your kind words, they helped me a lot.... Just feeling a little lost at the moment... I'm sure I will be back soon.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
12th Jan 2012 11:38am
Cry love, cry, makes you beautiful eyes.
And you will return stronger. Forged by pain.
And you will return stronger. Forged by pain.
12th Jan 2012 11:59am
Luca,
My eyes were not beautiful today - my mascara ran, and my eyes were red :-( but... Tomorrow - will be a better day. Thankx vixen x
My eyes were not beautiful today - my mascara ran, and my eyes were red :-( but... Tomorrow - will be a better day. Thankx vixen x
11th Jan 2012 7:36pm
I feel and felt that way , thats what im feeling now . i loved the piece , very touching .
12th Jan 2012 10:58am
Thank you Ahh Choo,
I really hate feeling like this... Hope you are feeling better soon too.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
I really hate feeling like this... Hope you are feeling better soon too.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
I find this poem very interesting. I can somehow relate; My words too have dried up for the time being, but not for lack of inspiration. Sometimes I don't feel like putting things in writing when I think what I write will be taken the wrong way or misunderstood and sometimes the things I want to write about must remain a secret. I want to get over this though, and maybe soon I will....
12th Jan 2012 7:08pm
Thanks scarletvelvet,
I Really hate that nothing comes to me - will spend my "time" reading everyone else's poetry - maybe that will give me some "inspiration" I hope that you too, will soon get over this hump. Feel like I am in a bit better place today...
Thank you for taking time to read my work - I really appreciate it.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
I Really hate that nothing comes to me - will spend my "time" reading everyone else's poetry - maybe that will give me some "inspiration" I hope that you too, will soon get over this hump. Feel like I am in a bit better place today...
Thank you for taking time to read my work - I really appreciate it.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
12th Jan 2012 6:30pm
I can totally relate I've realized that glimmer an spark comes back just as it left without a sound dope poem I loved it <3
12th Jan 2012 7:15pm
Thanks Jimmie_o
After reading your (and everyone else's) comments here - I realize that I am not the only one that has the problem of words failing to flow from their fingers - thank you for your comment Jimmie.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
After reading your (and everyone else's) comments here - I realize that I am not the only one that has the problem of words failing to flow from their fingers - thank you for your comment Jimmie.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
12th Jan 2012 7:29pm
Ur welcome^_^ I would love to have to some of your feedback on my writings tell me what do you think?
13th Jan 2012 4:34am
Hey bright eyes, dry those tears, we know who you are, and if this isn't a great poem I don't know what is! Just check out the feed back and you will know who you are!
Thanks very much for sharing your feelings with us, hope that ray of sunshine brightens up your day, cheers :-)xx
jiminy
Thanks very much for sharing your feelings with us, hope that ray of sunshine brightens up your day, cheers :-)xx
jiminy
16th Jan 2012 10:42am
Hi jiminy, thank you so much for your love and best wishes - my sun is shining brightly again - I just needed time to recharge my Batteries. You know.... Because of this site.... We can post our poetry right across the board of happy, sad, anger, lust - hell, jiminy - whatever we feel, we can write about... Just love this site... DUP really has it all...
My eyes are bright
My tears are dry
I will be fine
Till next I cry...
Thankx jiminy. I know that you will always be there.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
My eyes are bright
My tears are dry
I will be fine
Till next I cry...
Thankx jiminy. I know that you will always be there.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
26th Jan 2012 9:15am
Sounds like the dark nite of the soul, where inner visions are born. Like the skin of an onion, keep peeling away the layers along the way. This is where we meet. Going deeper. It's the end we journey toward, but in the end it's the journey that matters the most...
