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Effluvium
(eleven of 30 - Official DUP NaPo/GloPoWrimo 2020)
With wee grains of something
much smaller than sand
i listened and haphazardly
agreed with Her.
For the past ten or so spills
i forced out
coerced spills
i was certain is crap!
only to be notified
an inkling has been
RL’d****
Damn!? or Wow?
Faced with face wet
i cry sometimes
i am so touched by
Frequencies who
seemingly appear
(Feel) to understand.
& so it is (perhaps)
as my Beautiful Sister
related to me
we relate and connect
that which touches
our past
our feelings
our nows
us. . .
*****
Just know
i promise to keep on
crappin’
with and without
the proper
paper!!
_______________
#NaPoWriMo2020
105 words
83 unique
****RL = Reading List
re: FromTheAsh
With wee grains of something
much smaller than sand
i listened and haphazardly
agreed with Her.
For the past ten or so spills
i forced out
coerced spills
i was certain is crap!
only to be notified
an inkling has been
RL’d****
Damn!? or Wow?
Faced with face wet
i cry sometimes
i am so touched by
Frequencies who
seemingly appear
(Feel) to understand.
& so it is (perhaps)
as my Beautiful Sister
related to me
we relate and connect
that which touches
our past
our feelings
our nows
us. . .
*****
Just know
i promise to keep on
crappin’
with and without
the proper
paper!!
_______________
#NaPoWriMo2020
105 words
83 unique
****RL = Reading List
re: FromTheAsh
Published 11th Apr 2020
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"Faced with face wet
i cry sometimes
i am so touched by
Frequencies who
seemingly appear
(Feel) to understand."
I'm with you... Tonight was one of those nights for me. As cynical as I can be, people are awesome...
This is really beautiful and touching. I like the title you chose for it as well.
i cry sometimes
i am so touched by
Frequencies who
seemingly appear
(Feel) to understand."
I'm with you... Tonight was one of those nights for me. As cynical as I can be, people are awesome...
This is really beautiful and touching. I like the title you chose for it as well.
11th Apr 2020 12:11pm
It's always a good way to be
despite all the tears
appreciate the kind share
thank You
despite all the tears
appreciate the kind share
thank You
11th Apr 2020 12:12pm
Mmhmm... usually when the emotions are flowing the poetry is too.
You're most welcome, Tallen :)
You're most welcome, Tallen :)
11th Apr 2020 12:24pm
We take a little, what is needed and what relates to our state at present. Keep spilling
11th Apr 2020 4:55pm
11th Apr 2020 4:01pm
Wonderful tribute, tallen! I am sure she will appreciate it. Love Tim's comment about taking only what is needed.
11th Apr 2020 4:57pm
This all came about when Willow nominated one of my spills to
POEM OF THE MONTH -- APRIL
& here i was thinking it is crap even when i 1st posted it!! Surprised the heck outta me.
POEM OF THE MONTH -- APRIL
& here i was thinking it is crap even when i 1st posted it!! Surprised the heck outta me.
Anonymous
11th Apr 2020 9:05pm
Tallen...you brought me to tears and giggles simultaneously with this. I am -for once - at a loss for words. Connections occur without warning or reason...and that's part of what makes them so damn beautiful! Sending you virtual hugs!
11th Apr 2020 9:30pm
You have surprised me,
anew
Delighted to know i caused You to giggle
Honored for Your kind share and RL add
anew
Delighted to know i caused You to giggle
Honored for Your kind share and RL add
12th Apr 2020 2:00am
Dear T,
I know exactly what you mean! It’s your humility that makes you so wonderful to read and get close to. It’s a warm hug on a cold day or just because.
Your a poet at heart and in reality. So keep up the writes and don’t be so surprised when you’re RL’d ;-) H🌷
I know exactly what you mean! It’s your humility that makes you so wonderful to read and get close to. It’s a warm hug on a cold day or just because.
Your a poet at heart and in reality. So keep up the writes and don’t be so surprised when you’re RL’d ;-) H🌷
12th Apr 2020 1:28pm
aah You gave me a Beeeeeeeeg grin for my Sunday morning!!
thank You
Honored for the RL add
thank You
Honored for the RL add
12th Apr 2020 1:33pm
aw dearest Tallen I totally feel this
you are a beautiful soul
I relate to you on a deep level
it is a beautiful feeling when you know
you've connected with another on a deeper level...
I'm grateful for your presence here ❤
you are a beautiful soul
I relate to you on a deep level
it is a beautiful feeling when you know
you've connected with another on a deeper level...
I'm grateful for your presence here ❤
12th Apr 2020 1:37pm
i agree that You and me at times
connect deeply
and our resonance is very similar
it is a wonderful thing when 2 spirits make this type of connection as it lets us know we were never alone
thank You, Beautiful Brenda for the kind share
connect deeply
and our resonance is very similar
it is a wonderful thing when 2 spirits make this type of connection as it lets us know we were never alone
thank You, Beautiful Brenda for the kind share
