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Hopes & Dreams
My travels to the stars of hopes & dreams!
For in my mind I’ve walked the galaxy;
The spiraling adventures of extremes
Were marvels to a vision I could see.
It showed what I could be & crystalized
My travels to the stars of hopes & dreams.
The people that I’d meet were mystified;
They never thought it possible, the themes!
I had an “aha” moment for a scheme,
And asked who’d like to go when I assign
My travels to the stars of hopes & dreams’,
They shouted instantly ‘where do we sign!’
It’s been a century since that was said,
There’s only two of us sharing our memes:
(We still meet twice a year, the rest are dead)
My travels to the stars of hopes & dreams.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 2nd Apr 2020
| Edited 10th Apr 2020
Author's Note
Day 2 of 30
77 unique words of 125 total.
^Also for Grace’s “Poem based on Three words”
I picked set #3: travels, stars, hopes
77 unique words of 125 total.
^Also for Grace’s “Poem based on Three words”
I picked set #3: travels, stars, hopes
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Re. Hopes & Dreams
2nd Apr 2020 4:25pm
A Beautiful entry Jade, I Love This!!!
Good luck in the comp. Kidd-O!!!
Good luck in the comp. Kidd-O!!!
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2nd Apr 2020 4:48pm
Oh gosh, Soul, thank you for this, your visit, and for enjoying my little Quatern.🙏🏻
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2nd Apr 2020 6:35pm
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2nd Apr 2020 9:38pm
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2nd Apr 2020 9:07pm
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2nd Apr 2020 9:41pm
My gratitude, brother Stoney, for the support & a place of honor on your RL.🙏🏻
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2nd Apr 2020 11:48pm
Re. Hopes & Dreams
3rd Apr 2020 1:50am
Not bad Jade, not bad at all. Gave my paws a warm feeling.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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3rd Apr 2020 2:04am
Thank you, Kitty, I really appreciate this.
And PAW 2 PAW, throughout this month, as I ride on the waves of the NaPo, you’ll see results that will address a variety of moods, genre, poetic structure, free verse & rhyme. Also several leaps out of the box, and some from my comfy zone.
This tiger’s safe, virtual hugs,
Jade 🐾
And PAW 2 PAW, throughout this month, as I ride on the waves of the NaPo, you’ll see results that will address a variety of moods, genre, poetic structure, free verse & rhyme. Also several leaps out of the box, and some from my comfy zone.
This tiger’s safe, virtual hugs,
Jade 🐾
Re. Hopes & Dreams
3rd Apr 2020 5:02am
I'd like to sign up too, hopes and dreams sound like a great place to visit, I like this alot :)
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Aaw, thank you, PR, you’ve put a smile on my face @ 3am,☺️.
You come sign up anytime, I’d love it. Meantime, be safe & well.
🐾
You come sign up anytime, I’d love it. Meantime, be safe & well.
🐾
Re. Hopes & Dreams
Dear JP,
Geez, you write one poem to fit two comps. Fantastic! I’m in awe of this talent especially the quatern. Is there anything better than a galaxy of hopes and dreams? Maybe some good chocolate but other than that- nope. Lovely write. Best of luck. H🌷
Geez, you write one poem to fit two comps. Fantastic! I’m in awe of this talent especially the quatern. Is there anything better than a galaxy of hopes and dreams? Maybe some good chocolate but other than that- nope. Lovely write. Best of luck. H🌷
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I’m all ablush, dear Honoria, to find the words,
I’m grateful the way people are reacting. My moods each day of the NaPo will be mercurial, so I’m glad my Day 2 is giving readers the warm fuzzies.
And thank you!... that’s high praise comparing it to /good/ chocolate, and giving my piece your vote!🍫
And this is in the style of a Quatern, with a refrain line that descends with each quatrain stanza. I loved it with my very first try back in 2018!💌
Did I say I was trying to find the word??
Stay well & safe,
Jadey🐾
I’m grateful the way people are reacting. My moods each day of the NaPo will be mercurial, so I’m glad my Day 2 is giving readers the warm fuzzies.
And thank you!... that’s high praise comparing it to /good/ chocolate, and giving my piece your vote!🍫
And this is in the style of a Quatern, with a refrain line that descends with each quatrain stanza. I loved it with my very first try back in 2018!💌
Did I say I was trying to find the word??
Stay well & safe,
Jadey🐾
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Re: Re. Hopes & Dreams
3rd Apr 2020 1:59pm
*weeping*
Oh my friend, my dear dear friend..,
I’ve nissed you so much.., feeling so lost
my friend, my dear dear friend..,
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Oh my friend, my dear dear friend..,
I’ve nissed you so much.., feeling so lost
my friend, my dear dear friend..,
🐾
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3rd Apr 2020 2:13pm
Re. Hopes & Dreams
4th Apr 2020 5:00pm
Reminds of the poems from Peter Pan... Or the songs from the 1930's. I love the visions your words invoke. My travels to the stars of hopes and dreams.
Tommy 😻❤💕😻
Tommy 😻❤💕😻
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4th Apr 2020 5:07pm
*happy purrs & sighs, curling around you*
Oooh thank you so much, my tommycat... for your choices as you reminisce are exactly the way I imagined & felt as I composed each line.
your Jadey tiger🐾
Oooh thank you so much, my tommycat... for your choices as you reminisce are exactly the way I imagined & felt as I composed each line.
your Jadey tiger🐾
Re. Hopes & Dreams
4th Apr 2020 7:13pm
Hopes and dreams are ethereal in nature, and yet often we place our very existence on them. Thank you.
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4th Apr 2020 9:50pm
Aaw, you’re so welcome, Elsie, and I thank you for visiting my NaPo works to share your thoughts. I wish you well, and be safe.
Jade🐾
Jade🐾
Re. Hopes & Dreams
5th Apr 2020 1:28am
The visions of the stars of hopes and dreams are so wonderful ...it's what we need at this moment.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
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Re: Re. Hopes & Dreams
5th Apr 2020 3:33am
Dear Jasmin, I’m so glad you think so, and yes, these times weigh heavy on the world. Something to lighten the load for a few minutes now & then is a respite. I’m honored by your adding it to your RL.🙏🏻
Stay save, be well,
Jade
Stay save, be well,
Jade
Re. Hopes & Dreams
5th Apr 2020 6:06am
What a wonderful piece Ms. Jade. The stars always give us some hope and dreams, recharging us with an energy that makes us go longer.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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5th Apr 2020 1:32pm
Thank you, Wally... I might’ve said this to someone here onsite in the recent past that bears repeating now:
I’ve always had my head among the stars.✨
I’ve always had my head among the stars.✨