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misconception
She caught your eye
but remember
vodka looks like
water too
Ana Schwarz
but remember
vodka looks like
water too
Ana Schwarz
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Re. misconception
24th Mar 2020 11:21am
Looks can certainly be deceiving. Nice writing, Ana. Thanks for sharing, and welcome to DU :)
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24th Mar 2020 11:23am
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Re: Re. misconception
24th Mar 2020 6:13pm
thank you, I am glad I've found this community as well ♥ it makes me so happy that someone understands
Re. misconception
24th Mar 2020 12:13pm
Brief but to the point! Reminds me of my friend’s first trip to the US. He had a birthday. His aunt and I took him to a nightclub. One lady chatted him up. He was convinced he was in love: she just wanted him to buy her a drink.
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Re: Re. misconception
24th Mar 2020 6:15pm
and sadly this happens so often, to all of us, but how else are we gonna understand how life works. Things are usually simple, we just don't wanna see the truth
Re. misconception
24th Mar 2020 3:45pm
I love how precise this is. For so few words this says a whole lot! well played
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Re. misconception
24th Mar 2020 4:17pm
Welcome, Ana, to the DEEP!
It’s lovely to meet a new member who knows how to write minimal verse as this...
my regards & respect,
Jade🐾
It’s lovely to meet a new member who knows how to write minimal verse as this...
my regards & respect,
Jade🐾
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Re: Re. misconception
24th Mar 2020 6:32pm
Re. misconception
24th Mar 2020 8:48pm
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Re. misconception
18th Apr 2020 6:48am
Very short yet has such a very deep strong meaning towards it. Great job keep up the good work!
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