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He Loved Me Not....
Never wishing for the vast sea
or heavens
nor gold and silver
I still dreamt for the unattainable.
The lucidly audible word...
to be heard from the whispering tip of his tongue.
The overtly tangible word...
to be felt beneath the caressing tips of his fingers.
My mind left to discern
as my heart ached with fissions
from such fickle moments.
Like plucking petals from their tender and unwilling bud;
He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me
He loves me not...
to be left as barren as the stem,
but laden with thorns.
As precious seconds
oscillated into wasted evanescence...
I still dreamt for the unattainable
while mourning each petal ever plucked.
or heavens
nor gold and silver
I still dreamt for the unattainable.
The lucidly audible word...
to be heard from the whispering tip of his tongue.
The overtly tangible word...
to be felt beneath the caressing tips of his fingers.
My mind left to discern
as my heart ached with fissions
from such fickle moments.
Like plucking petals from their tender and unwilling bud;
He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me
He loves me not...
to be left as barren as the stem,
but laden with thorns.
As precious seconds
oscillated into wasted evanescence...
I still dreamt for the unattainable
while mourning each petal ever plucked.
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 19th Mar 2020
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
Author's Note
Copyright © 2020 PandoraUnleashed. All rights reserved.
Time to erase the many ugly years. Time heals, forgiveness saves, love lives... ♥️
Time to erase the many ugly years. Time heals, forgiveness saves, love lives... ♥️
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Re. He Loved Me Not....
19th Mar 2020 11:14pm
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19th Mar 2020 11:45pm
Thank you muchly, Pete. So nice to be greeted with a new face as well(to me)...
Re. He Loved Me Not....
Letting time be time can be a most painful freaking experience it never heals, it only get further away in time and space. It's a simple concept really....
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19th Mar 2020 11:48pm
Hey, dearie..
Thanks for the thoughts & add. I appreciate both so kindly. In this case, time has healed. We're married(still) and feel what love should feel like.......finally!♥️
Thanks for the thoughts & add. I appreciate both so kindly. In this case, time has healed. We're married(still) and feel what love should feel like.......finally!♥️
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19th Mar 2020 11:51pm
Excellent and hurts has been diminished, but is still beneath the surface closer than maybe most if us care not to think about. Trying to live in the moment of our existence. A most difficukt task.
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Re. He Loved Me Not....
Pandy, you weave passion into your poetry like an exquisitely woven Sheherazade magic carpet that flies me into the heart of a forgiveness so strong its renewed bonds are unbreakable. Your poem zeroed in on the healing force of love with words so well placed never to be erased from the heart of those who have known the pain of wounded love. Superb my friend.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. He Loved Me Not....
19th Mar 2020 11:53pm
Oh dearest John, your compliments are always stunning little stories of their own! You made me look up Sheherazade. I love to learn something new, so Yay! Thank you so much for your recognition, it's definitely out of my comfort zone, but now that love has healed, it definitely made it easier. I appreciate your presence so greatly! Xxx
Re. He Loved Me Not....
19th Mar 2020 11:35pm
sweet words to be read as the love seams to drip off the page
nice
spoke to soon
nice
spoke to soon
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Re: Re. He Loved Me Not....
19th Mar 2020 11:55pm
Well, love definitely wasn't dripping during this period & this write, but it is pouring out in life now!;)
Re. He Loved Me Not....
20th Mar 2020 00:19am
Well written , and spoken , as you do so well , Pandora...
My favorite slices of the whole ?
The phrases :
"The lucidly audible word..."
then the follow up ;
And "The overtly tangible word..."
with it's follow up...
Very powerful , though succinct...
Often the best approach , by an accomplished poetess...
Which you truly are...:)
And I am most pleased to hear you are doing well ,
in the tides of time , and passion / love...
May that energy continue , and blossom , like a newborn rose !
My favorite slices of the whole ?
The phrases :
"The lucidly audible word..."
then the follow up ;
And "The overtly tangible word..."
with it's follow up...
Very powerful , though succinct...
Often the best approach , by an accomplished poetess...
Which you truly are...:)
And I am most pleased to hear you are doing well ,
in the tides of time , and passion / love...
May that energy continue , and blossom , like a newborn rose !
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20th Mar 2020 00:34am
You flatter me so, dear Blackwolf! Thank you for the kind words and thoughts. Yes, life is treating me well & hopefully you as well. I'm so glad to see you're still here, you've set a record since my arrival! You get extra Pandy hugs, btw!
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20th Mar 2020 6:24am
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20th Mar 2020 9:59am
This is very enlightening and inspiring words of inner love nicely composed dear poetess..respect
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13th Apr 2020 1:07am
Thank you Stoney. I'm so grateful you're part of the Deep. You have a charisma needed here.❣
Re: Re. He Loved Me Not....
13th Apr 2020 11:05am
I appreciate the support and understanding with the love for I am glad I found this site personally cause I needed a outlet to express my feelings and emotions spiritually as well as mentally and freely as thyself being here has created a balance in my life that was definitely needed to reconnect with the me I am as a man who has gone through so much within my life...respect dear poetess as always you are a precious gem
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Re. He Loved Me Not....
20th Mar 2020 2:40pm
As barren as the stem ... feel that way ... again ... haunting write my dear ...
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13th Apr 2020 1:10am
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21st Mar 2020 3:27pm
Wow You always come with a new and so damn impressive avatar!!
It's really appreciable.❤️
It's really appreciable.❤️
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Re: Re. He Loved Me Not....
13th Apr 2020 1:12am
Haha, thanks. So glad to see you're still here, love. Maybe I'll stick around this time...💞🌼
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9th Apr 2020 4:59pm
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13th Apr 2020 1:17am
Thank you for a treasured comment! It's nice to see a new face (to me) too. I'm not sure how long you've been writing, but you WILL develop your own style and masterpieces over time. I haven't read from you, but mine has evolved over the past few years and had some real doozies along the way. Even now, I follow no rules & just write...So don't give up. Please!
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Re: Re. He Loved Me Not....
13th Apr 2020 1:05am
I'm so glad to see you back too! Perhaps we can all move forth more easily around here too...Pandy hugs!❣
Re. He Loved Me Not....
13th Apr 2020 1:05am
to be left as barren as the stem,
but laden with thorns.
As precious seconds
oscillated into wasted evanescence...
In love with this.
This was very beautifully written.
but laden with thorns.
As precious seconds
oscillated into wasted evanescence...
In love with this.
This was very beautifully written.
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13th Apr 2020 2:38am
Thank you so very much for the kindness. I'm humbled! It's nice to see a new face on my page too. I need to make my way to you! 🌷 - Pandy