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Hypnotized
I see her walking by,
Ass swaying from side to side.
It has me mesmerized.
Stare and gawk.
How her shapely hips walk.
I can稚 even talk.
Back and forth it goes.
Maybe she knows,
The effect on me from head to toes.
Her sashay has me hypnotized.
My groin is energized.
Tenting in public I値l get chastised.
Thankfully, pants are oversized.
Tick tock, side to side.
I知 along for the ride.
She continues to stride,
I remain hypnotized.
Ass swaying from side to side.
It has me mesmerized.
Stare and gawk.
How her shapely hips walk.
I can稚 even talk.
Back and forth it goes.
Maybe she knows,
The effect on me from head to toes.
Her sashay has me hypnotized.
My groin is energized.
Tenting in public I値l get chastised.
Thankfully, pants are oversized.
Tick tock, side to side.
I知 along for the ride.
She continues to stride,
I remain hypnotized.
Published 11th Mar 2020
Author's Note
The weather getting warmer and the bountiful sights.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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11th Mar 2020 8:12pm
11th Mar 2020 11:12pm
Thank-you. Always appreciate your comments. I like the mystery of if she knows or doesn't.
12th Mar 2020 6:53am
Summery weather and beautiful shapely women always make hypnotic combination.
12th Mar 2020 7:26am
I want you to challenge your wordplay more add some imagery and be more descriptive with your words and add more emphasis
Anonymous
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18th Mar 2020 2:35pm
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20th Mar 2020 11:52pm
9th Jun 2020 11:35am
9th Jun 2020 4:12pm
26th Jun 2020 10:24pm
"Tenting in public I値l get chastised." lol - depends on where you are I guess. Enjoyed this one. :)
(you are overdue for a new one so where is it??)
(you are overdue for a new one so where is it??)
26th Jun 2020 10:28pm
The "tenting" is affecting my concentration. : )
Thanks for reading and I'm delighted you enjoyed it, KristinaX.
Thanks for reading and I'm delighted you enjoyed it, KristinaX.
17th Nov 2020 00:14am
" (you are overdue for a new one so where is it??)" - overdue is no longer the word for it - now it's just flat out beyond ignored.. I know you can write in a tent so there is no excuse.
7th Jan 2021 3:59pm
13th Nov 2020 6:06am
Priceless! Just priceless! This is so cleverly written and very engaging!;I love it!
13th Nov 2020 8:01pm
15th Nov 2020 7:23pm
13th Nov 2020 10:11pm
I didn't like it! I loved it. So much so that it went straight to my RL! You did fabulous!
15th Nov 2020 6:47pm
Careful sipping Chardonnay when commenting, you may cast more praise then you should. LOL! All kidding aside, thank-you very much for your very kind words. Kinda made me blush too! I get lucky once in a while when putting type to paper.
1st Mar 2021 3:24am
1st Mar 2021 5:16am
1st Mar 2021 5:20am
I guess I should have been more specific. Today I had my own encounter along these lines and when I read this it made me chuckle a bit.
24th Mar 2021 3:00am
Absolutely love the rhyme scheme here and the flow is spot on.. oh an I bet that ass had you drooling! Woot woot Leo 👍🏻
Always your sister in ink ♥️🤗
Jackie xo
Always your sister in ink ♥️🤗
Jackie xo
27th Mar 2021 7:26pm
Thanks Sis. Nowadays, my mask would have covered the drool, but wasn't an option then. : )
🧝🏻♀️💞
🧝🏻♀️💞
27th Mar 2021 5:36pm
This had me grinning and thinking of spring and then I read the comments, to get to the bottom to put my own, and I was almost laughing out loud... Hee hee hee... I enjoyed reading everything, so much! ☺
Thank you for brightening my day, dear Leo
🌹
xo
-B
Thank you for brightening my day, dear Leo
🌹
xo
-B
27th Mar 2021 7:28pm
Bienvenido! Glad it brought you joy. I'm sure you are a sight in the spring too! : )
22nd Jun 2021 3:38am
22nd Jun 2021 6:02am
Thanks LJ. I'm glad you enjoyed. Summer weather, a lot of hypnotists are about.
8th Jul 2022 9:02pm
This is so cute and wonderfully stated. It's sexy and delivers!
Loved the entire piece...with a cool, strong anticipated finish. :) Just lovely
Her sashay has me hypnotized.
My groin is energized.
Tenting in public I値l get chastised.
Thankfully, pants are oversized.
Tick tock, side to side.
I知 along for the ride.
She continues to stride,
I remain hypnotized.
Loved the entire piece...with a cool, strong anticipated finish. :) Just lovely
Her sashay has me hypnotized.
My groin is energized.
Tenting in public I値l get chastised.
Thankfully, pants are oversized.
Tick tock, side to side.
I知 along for the ride.
She continues to stride,
I remain hypnotized.
9th Jul 2022 9:53pm
