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H O R S E S
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 8th Mar 2020
| Edited 10th Mar 2020
Author's Note
My entry for admin's "Visual Poetry #horses".
The "shredded" image was taken by me, Jade Pandora, on purpose with my iPhone SE.
The "shredded" image was taken by me, Jade Pandora, on purpose with my iPhone SE.
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
8th Mar 2020 2:39am
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Re: Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 4:43am
Well hello! Sorry for a slightly slow reply. I stepped away to take my multivitamin & decided to have some dinner. Mmm, it smelled good.
And yes, I stopped fretting over dealing with a possible glitch for a while and then it came to me, and wa-la! Hmm. I just realized I never tried to spell ‘wa-la’, so I don’t know the spelling lol.
And yes, the horses are metaphor.
And also yes, I’m going over to add & follow you.
Nice tiger there🐾
And yes, I stopped fretting over dealing with a possible glitch for a while and then it came to me, and wa-la! Hmm. I just realized I never tried to spell ‘wa-la’, so I don’t know the spelling lol.
And yes, the horses are metaphor.
And also yes, I’m going over to add & follow you.
Nice tiger there🐾
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
8th Mar 2020 11:56am
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Re: Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 12:07pm
That’s the first thing I did was go over and read every syllable on your page. That’s why I brought up the multivitamin, and something smelling good.😇 I was good-naturedly ribbing you, and glad to see you.
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
8th Mar 2020 12:44pm
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Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 3:16am
Dear JP,
They are truly majestic beasts. I miss mine terribly. I guess they can leave destruction in their wake. My experience of that was more in the form of sh*t I’d have to muck out but it could’ve been worse. Excellent write. Good luck in the comp. H🌷🐎
They are truly majestic beasts. I miss mine terribly. I guess they can leave destruction in their wake. My experience of that was more in the form of sh*t I’d have to muck out but it could’ve been worse. Excellent write. Good luck in the comp. H🌷🐎
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Re: Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 5:06am
Dearest Honoria,
How fortunate you once owned horses. I’ve been drawing them since I was 12... the age when so many young girls have their first crush... with a horse. And my visual verse is in fact a metaphor.
Thank you so much for your organic words. x
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How fortunate you once owned horses. I’ve been drawing them since I was 12... the age when so many young girls have their first crush... with a horse. And my visual verse is in fact a metaphor.
Thank you so much for your organic words. x
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Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 3:37am
So damn true as if the circumstance we're a train wreck you can't take your eyes off of Knowing the outcome makes no difference you remain fixed
Excellent piece powerful brevity
Excellent piece powerful brevity
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Thank you, sister Val... you’ve got it in one, and I’m moved by the impact my piece had on you. x
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Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 3:52am
A metaphor for how life can go at times?
That's how I take it. Apologies if I'm mistaken my dear Jade.
Excellent write. Good luck in the comp.
hugs,
buddhakitty
That's how I take it. Apologies if I'm mistaken my dear Jade.
Excellent write. Good luck in the comp.
hugs,
buddhakitty
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Re: Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 5:10am
Why thank you. No need to apologize, darling Kitty, you’re never far wrong. And that’s what this piece is. x
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Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 11:48am
so true words of horses a beautiful creature to watch in amazement of there beauty...respect dear poetess
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Re: Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 12:25pm
My gracious thanks to you, dear brother Stoney... you are such a good & thoughtful man.🙏🏻
Re: Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 12:53pm
i appreicate the love and respect one thing life teaches you its easy to be humble and to truly learn to appreicate the true beauty of lifes living creatures big and small...respect
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Re. H O R S E S
8th Mar 2020 8:27pm
Great stuff Jade and yes their is something about a horse, the fascination, to me I think it goes back to watching western movies over the years 🌷
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Re: Re. H O R S E S
Thank you kindly, Pete, for stopping by. And even though In this visual verse I’ve expressed the hashtag ‘horses’ as a metaphor, I’ve always been fascinated by the equine species since I was a child.
Re. H O R S E S
10th Mar 2020 6:59am
The sentence use, bridle my hate and tether my fear, is awesome.
Nicely written.
Love
Jasmine
Nicely written.
Love
Jasmine
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Re: Re. H O R S E S
10th Mar 2020 9:23am
Thank you so much, sweet Jasmine...
I can't thank you enough for your visit and sharing your thoughts with me like this.
Love also
ever
Jade
I can't thank you enough for your visit and sharing your thoughts with me like this.
Love also
ever
Jade
Re. H O R S E S
11th Mar 2020 6:33pm
That last line is so true and so epic. You can't help but watch them in awe when they run in a herd.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. H O R S E S
11th Mar 2020 6:44pm
I appreciate your thoughts on this, Wally.
I always think of it as watching two oncoming locomotives about to collide in a cacophony of twisted wreckage... you can’t turn away.
I always think of it as watching two oncoming locomotives about to collide in a cacophony of twisted wreckage... you can’t turn away.
Re. H O R S E S
14th Mar 2020 4:30am
Powerful Jade
A metaphor I would never have thought of, but you penned it so well
A metaphor I would never have thought of, but you penned it so well
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14th Mar 2020 4:40am