The details of this write are so endearing. Impacting snapshot that reveals spirit in subtle emanations. It's the essence of poetry. This is the first thing I read so far today that made my heart ache, some indescribable resonance passing between yours and mine.
How this transported me to deeply touch my emotive side...theres a "Damn" there. I know it's a tad corny of me to say it in such a way, but tis true nonetheless. This ...well Your style of delivery is quite deft and very different from mine cheesy ways...Just lovely and the grain that You place upon this particular Write is true Greatness!!!
you are so not cheesy at all. i understand that it is hard to have some outside self objectivity/view of oneself but anyone who considers your writing cheesy would require a glove-slap in the face and an instant demand for a pistol duel at dawn.
you reach depths that I do not have the lung capacity for. that is why I am so blown over by your comments.