Headcase 9

Sounds like someone got murdered, quartered and bagged.
Nice write...for midnight reads. 😀

I had hoped to gather something worth a skin-crawl
Thank You so much Grace!!!

forever confused

god yes

...yes...yes they are :D

Feels like a curse showing its face. Haunting 🗝🕯

I've been trying to dabble with the darker Writes...it's the only other trick I know lol
Going to treat things like Halloween for a while.

Hugs N love for the visit Kidd-O

Right from the opening, you establish the feel of the write, with powerful, quick fire imagery. Fucked, black and charred. Your language throughout continuously reinforces this dystopian, violent current. The third stanza is my favorite. Thoroughly macabre. It's cool to see you delving into shadow work. In my spiritual study it is said that awareness proceeds change. We have to face and befriend our darkness in order to turn it into light. Namaste.

Truly I believe that, growing up with ghost stories comic books the classics etc etc
The bleak and dismal has forever had its draw.
I do believe it necessary to play with it, inspect it understand it.

I can't be around or think of negatives when I am upset or in a negative space.
In the other sense I can't do overly happy/giddy if I am in that state.

So what that means Daniel is that...when You see something remotely dark from me...I must be in a really good mood lol


I appreciate Your time/thoughts Good Sir!!!

Haha and I appreciate the insight in turn, my brother.

utterly dark take SoulPoet... the ever so shady cold nighmarish  deaths of inescapable the haunting the confusion ..in thw each walk n talk of this cob-webbed knottedness ...only feels a needy vent & a positive tending towards the the life warmth & sunlight of liberative love in all spiritual chaos & search encosling clarities.... reminds me of a once waking from nightmare to real nightmarish 'something' in spotted vision & juz gotten frozen & muted to the core when the exact opposite of immediate response was required..aw dunn bother..juzme Soul...this is  a pitchblack whirlpooly swallowing ghostly drawing ~drowning scribe ... write on:)

Uma You are Gold :*

We keep one foot in both sides of things
I myself am just happy to see You here and extremely grateful for the RL , I scooped up some of this from the eternal darkness thread, so it almost feels like a cheat as opposed to a proper or normal Write-Sigh-whaddya do heehee

Love to You and Yours

I enjoyed this poem. Every line pulled me in but this one plays out in my head
”guilt of the living man holds no key but repent “
I can definitely say I will be back by your page to read more. you have so many! But there’s enough time in a Day to read them.

Thank You for Your kindness and time-Most Appreciated!!!

Fantastic writing

Thank You for saying such a kind thing and taking time here-Most Appreciated!!!

Fantastic writing.

Thank You Muchly for the visit!!!

Darling you amaze me

Awwww You're too kind !!!
Thank You for hanging out and reading my crapola

Fan-freaking-tastic.

:) What an awesome comment!!!
Greatly Appreciate You visiting Ani!!!

Whoaaa, reminds me of some of the old stuff I used to write, heh. Very metal-esque ;)

Hehee I'll forever be drawn to the dark and the macabre.
Thank You so much for supporting me NB, Your visits not only make me smile, they make me feel worthy...thats no small feat, so Thank You my Friend!!!