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Loadstone
Found on the dark-side of town
came the rush
run
dissemination
they oozed ice cool
straight blades in their little fingertips
steady in the get-up
Spokane and all the rest
was it able I do not know
for coal is one rough diamond
while sifting dust
along a trail of white-line-fever
lungs and gonna-bust
eighteen barley's and a belt
left a hell of a bench seat
where pine and ass stick
......stuck together in give up
fuck riding (position) a wooden womb
Published 27th Feb 2020
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27th Feb 2020 10:22pm
27th Feb 2020 10:25pm
It's shite...You just haven't looked at it long enough
It's like the hidden boat in the painting
It's like the hidden boat in the painting
27th Feb 2020 11:39pm
28th Feb 2020 6:26pm
The choices of description here are so creative and original. I've been over it several times, admiring the way I have just never heard anything quite like it. I would be thrilled if you'd send an audio of this to the podcast for us to feature brother.
28th Feb 2020 6:53pm
You are very kind Daniel,
This was much longer and I had to lop about the same amount off...
Thank You for finding its merit....of it I wasn't sure
This was much longer and I had to lop about the same amount off...
Thank You for finding its merit....of it I wasn't sure
29th Feb 2020 8:09pm
That's an interesting read, that suggest interpretations according to ones understanding.
29th Feb 2020 10:34pm
Thank You for visiting me Grace :D
I'm glad this could draw in...I had hoped this would makes sense upon other avenues.
I'm glad this could draw in...I had hoped this would makes sense upon other avenues.
2nd Mar 2020 6:14pm
2nd Mar 2020 6:34pm
I am Honoured to see You here Calimity!!!
Thank You for the visit, kind words and RL
Yeah lol...I actually kinda liked that bit :)
Its the one part my ego would allow - the rest is shite :D
Thank You for the visit, kind words and RL
Yeah lol...I actually kinda liked that bit :)
Its the one part my ego would allow - the rest is shite :D
