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direction to use
the monotonous beep
from the microwave
the pungent smoke
trapped within
the air blistering
with heat
the ominous shadows
and shut trapdoors
the figments of
sacrificed dreams
and fragments of
rushed thru lives
it's a changeover
before interval
an impressionist work
of art
the deconstructed death
of a man
all-captured-and-shown
on-high-definition
watch and pause
pop a popcorn
and move on
suppress-smile-wink
wrinkle the dead skin
around one eye
exfoliate
switch channels
feel something burn
inside
mind-your-business
.
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nice cul'tivation....
6th Jan 2012 6:21pm
re: nice cul'tivation....
6th Jan 2012 7:40pm
deep
Anonymous
6th Jan 2012 6:45pm
this is so so deep Mr Wand. I am not sure how to comprehend it. Scary.

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re: deep
6th Jan 2012 7:41pm
Al
:)Now I am not sure
of the way in which
I could say something.
It means I have had the
right intent.
Mission accomplished.
Curtsy,
S'
:)Now I am not sure
of the way in which
I could say something.
It means I have had the
right intent.
Mission accomplished.
Curtsy,
S'
I must agree
6th Jan 2012 7:17pm
Scary.
As always if you want a poem to require thought, come to your side of the world.
As always if you want a poem to require thought, come to your side of the world.
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re: I must agree
6th Jan 2012 7:43pm
Looking...
6th Jan 2012 10:05pm
from within to the outside. The the prism of thoughts from each side. As usual lightbringer, you painted the thoughts well with flourish. :D
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re: Looking...
6th Jan 2012 10:06pm
Re: direction to use
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2012 8:00pm
Hi there,
This one is a great write....Its a little like going into a movie theatre and watching the film of ones life. To deconstruct death and therefore life too is an interesting theme.
Encore!!!!!
Mourganna¤
This one is a great write....Its a little like going into a movie theatre and watching the film of ones life. To deconstruct death and therefore life too is an interesting theme.
Encore!!!!!
Mourganna¤

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re: Re: direction to use
2nd Oct 2012 10:28pm
mourganna
wow. glad you stopped by this one.
had forgotten this,almost.:] you
have said it all. beautifully.
thank you.
power,
sumeet
wow. glad you stopped by this one.
had forgotten this,almost.:] you
have said it all. beautifully.
thank you.
power,
sumeet
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21st Nov 2012 2:46am
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26th Nov 2012 4:45am
kritcool
haha.:] fair enough.
thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts.
power,
sumeet
haha.:] fair enough.
thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts.
power,
sumeet
Re: direction to use
7th Dec 2012 1:34pm
Succinctly brazen, yet prying open many potentials lurking beyond the door jams of possibilities in this piece.
Great job.
Great job.
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re: Re: direction to use
7th Dec 2012 4:22pm
branch isole
ah such a pleasure to have you again.:]
its a surprise that this one gets picked
up often. you have deconstructed it with
a clinical finesse.
thank you.
sumeet
ah such a pleasure to have you again.:]
its a surprise that this one gets picked
up often. you have deconstructed it with
a clinical finesse.
thank you.
sumeet