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Re. Forces (in haiku/senryu)
Re. Forces (in haiku/senryu)
11th Feb 2020 11:16am
Re: Re. Forces (in haiku/senryu)
11th Feb 2020 12:19pm
Oh yes my pagan sister.., Merry Meet & Blessed Be. Mother Nature still rules the roost.
warm hugs
Jade Tigress🐾
warm hugs
Jade Tigress🐾
Re. Forces (in haiku/senryu)
11th Feb 2020 11:36am
Re: Re. Forces (in haiku/senryu)
11th Feb 2020 12:23pm
Re. Forces (haiku/senryu)
11th Feb 2020 12:36pm
beautifully written so much reflection of true nature love this piece...respect
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Re: Re. Forces (haiku/senryu)
11th Feb 2020 12:48pm
My dear Stoney, I thank you deeply for how you receive my eastern works, and I can’t recall when I last did a visual ( maybe it was my “2 Cinquains” ).
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RL appreciation🙏🏻
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RL appreciation🙏🏻
Re: Re. Forces (haiku/senryu)
11th Feb 2020 12:59pm
yeah that is it Cinquains 2 i love that one as well...respect dear poetess
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Re. Forces
11th Feb 2020 10:16pm
A striking view of masculinity. This ends on a startling note. Very fine work, Jadey.
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Re: Re. Forces
13th Feb 2020 6:23am
Omgosh, dear crowfly friend, I’m beside myself - your response almost changed me from Libra to Gemini!😆
Thank you for your appreciation, and recommendation.🙏🏻
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Jadey🐾
Thank you for your appreciation, and recommendation.🙏🏻
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Jadey🐾
Re. Forces
14th Feb 2020 5:24pm
Oh Ms. Jade, this was a powerful write. I liked that going into the piece (knowing it was only a haiku), it's a refreshing feeling to see it's for the visual comp. It's interesting that everyone brings a different view.
Wonderful work.
Wonderful work.
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Re: Re. Forces
Thanks so much, Wally, for your amazing thoughts and for the RL honor, I’m so very moved. And you bring up something true and a wonder to observe:
“...that everyone brings a different view.”
“...that everyone brings a different view.”
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Re: Re. Forces
My friend, I think if you put your poetic mind to it, you could rework & transform anything into a new & better magic.
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Re: Re. Forces
And I totally understand. Apologies. That’s what I thought you meant, in your mind.
The other day when I published my poem in honor of you, you knew how it read was meant with absolute respect as my gift to you. If you ever did that as something meant for me, I would go speechless, in a good way.
By the way, I think you did do something as a thank you. You pm’d me, but you didn’t give me a title.😌
The other day when I published my poem in honor of you, you knew how it read was meant with absolute respect as my gift to you. If you ever did that as something meant for me, I would go speechless, in a good way.
By the way, I think you did do something as a thank you. You pm’d me, but you didn’t give me a title.😌