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It Appeared to Disappear
There was a destiny
but it drowned and
floated away on the day
that hope was hung
from the tree fate grew.
The idea died too.
but it drowned and
floated away on the day
that hope was hung
from the tree fate grew.
The idea died too.
Published 6th Feb 2020
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6th Feb 2020 1:09am
Halloween cat, pirate treasure chest, quiet reading in progress sign, only one way ... Some magic here ... Love it!!! Bless and love ... .
6th Feb 2020 1:36am
6th Feb 2020 1:59am
Ideas die a lonely death in the minds of man. Excellent write nik.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
6th Feb 2020 6:54pm
That a perfect pic to an astounding brevity n essence of a poem..however dark it is..sometimes , perhaps often..the apocalypse need to happen ..to erase off the whatever 'things' ,for better? , for the larger cyclicality of a destiny that is all..juzme Nik, excellent poem!
6th Feb 2020 7:17pm
6th Feb 2020 6:54pm
That a perfect pic to an astounding brevity n essence of a poem..however dark it is..sometimes , perhaps often..the apocalypse need to happen ..to erase off the whatever 'things' ,for better? , for the larger cyclicality of a destiny that is all..juzme Nik, excellent poem!
