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Feel You Radiating
Only in you
Do I see
A sanctuary
For the love
I have carried so long
Beautiful
I whisper beautiful
Pinch myself
So I know I am awake
For you defy logic
Melted
Have been melted
From a frozen limbo
Feel you radiating
Like the sun
It would be divine
To be surrounded
By your effervescent soul
Awakening every sense
I thought long dead
Do I see
A sanctuary
For the love
I have carried so long
Beautiful
I whisper beautiful
Pinch myself
So I know I am awake
For you defy logic
Melted
Have been melted
From a frozen limbo
Feel you radiating
Like the sun
It would be divine
To be surrounded
By your effervescent soul
Awakening every sense
I thought long dead
Published 5th Feb 2020
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Ohhh my.... this moves me.. deeply .... viscerally potent and completely relatable.... I think some of these emotions and descriptions you eloquently pen are secreted dreams we all must have had or how we wish to be thought of like you've described, by another—at some point in our lives....
I really was captivated, C
Excellent job!
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I really was captivated, C
Excellent job!
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