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The Dark Side
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I live life on the dark side of the moon,
You can’t tell if I ever see the sun.
I watch the stars in nurseries as they bloom,
And give them names of planets every one.
I slipped the surly bonds of Earth to find
I live life on the dark side of the moon.
There’s craters to explore as I unwind,
Rare objects while I write my next haiku.
It’s time I had some lunch this afternoon,
I’ve gathered pretty samples for a book.
I live life on the dark side of the moon,
I’ve made a little dugout where I cook.
And so it’s now I stroll among the stars,
The way unmark’d my feet lift in a swoon.
The pull of bodies, Earth & angry Mars,
I live life on the dark side of the moon.
I live life on the dark side of the moon,
You can’t tell if I ever see the sun.
I watch the stars in nurseries as they bloom,
And give them names of planets every one.
I slipped the surly bonds of Earth to find
I live life on the dark side of the moon.
There’s craters to explore as I unwind,
Rare objects while I write my next haiku.
It’s time I had some lunch this afternoon,
I’ve gathered pretty samples for a book.
I live life on the dark side of the moon,
I’ve made a little dugout where I cook.
And so it’s now I stroll among the stars,
The way unmark’d my feet lift in a swoon.
The pull of bodies, Earth & angry Mars,
I live life on the dark side of the moon.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 4th Feb 2020
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Re. The Dark Side
4th Feb 2020 5:33pm
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Re. The Dark Side
4th Feb 2020 5:44pm
Not certain why but this line
" I watch the stars in nurseries as they bloom, "
i found very cute imaging You doing this
Wonderful spill
" I watch the stars in nurseries as they bloom, "
i found very cute imaging You doing this
Wonderful spill
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4th Feb 2020 6:20pm
((( I live life on the dark side of the moon )))
once upon a time ,,, i sent a little princess or rather a psyche named ( Onaiss ) to the moon !
i told her to stay there and waiting my arrival .
but ,,,,,,, she went and proceed to the dark side of the moon !!!!!!! .
O ,,, she disobey me ,,,, and i lost her at that side .
so jade try to find her ,,, if you did , bring her back .
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i am joking ,,, it is just like which i wrote before in my own privacy .
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your poem very nice , very very nice , i like it really .
hope for you the happy life
YOURS
HUSSEIN
once upon a time ,,, i sent a little princess or rather a psyche named ( Onaiss ) to the moon !
i told her to stay there and waiting my arrival .
but ,,,,,,, she went and proceed to the dark side of the moon !!!!!!! .
O ,,, she disobey me ,,,, and i lost her at that side .
so jade try to find her ,,, if you did , bring her back .
_______________________
i am joking ,,, it is just like which i wrote before in my own privacy .
_______________________
your poem very nice , very very nice , i like it really .
hope for you the happy life
YOURS
HUSSEIN
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Aahhh, thank you for the adventure, Hussein, I’m glad my poem inspired you!
🌚Jade🌝
🌚Jade🌝
Re. The Dark Side
4th Feb 2020 10:26pm
Beautiful imagery and emotion appeal. This is something I feel as well.
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4th Feb 2020 10:46pm
Why thank you for connecting with me, CosiestPrism, it means a lot when a reader opens up and shares in return. I love to trip the light when I’m inspired.
🌚Jade🌝
RL gratitude
🌚Jade🌝
RL gratitude
Re. The Dark Side
4th Feb 2020 10:51pm
I picture you strolling among the stars rather than living on the dark side of the moon. Fine work Jade
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4th Feb 2020 11:13pm
With your wonderful sense of support & proportion, my crowfly friend, I thank you for sharing how you connected with my imagination.🙏🏻
🌚Jade🌝
🌚Jade🌝
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4th Feb 2020 11:46pm
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5th Feb 2020 12:32pm
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Humble thanks to you, brother Stoney, with equal respect returned.
🐯
🙏🏻
🌚Jade🌝
RL gratitude
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🙏🏻
🌚Jade🌝
RL gratitude
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6th Feb 2020 11:19am
Re. The Dark Side
9th Feb 2020 00:51am
The universe is funny. As I'm reading this I'm listening to Gustav Holst "The Planets" with the Mars movement and your poem mentioning "Angry Mars" made me smile. The movement is subtitled "The Bringer of War".
But on the dark side of the moon , I picture it always looking outward, counting and naming the stars.
Well done.
But on the dark side of the moon , I picture it always looking outward, counting and naming the stars.
Well done.
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Oooh thank you, Wally, I LOVE that you shared this with me!
I have Holst on an old LP but can’t play it since I no longer have a proper turntable. Instead, in these times, I listen through earbuds on YouTube.
I’ll always have my eyes to the stars...
🌚Jade🌝
I have Holst on an old LP but can’t play it since I no longer have a proper turntable. Instead, in these times, I listen through earbuds on YouTube.
I’ll always have my eyes to the stars...
🌚Jade🌝