deepundergroundpoetry.com
Forged From Stars
What we share is ours.
We know, in silence.
It needs no voice to be heard.
Loud and clear it echoes in your head
like the tunes of your favorite song.
We know, in silence.
It needs no voice to be heard.
Loud and clear it echoes in your head
like the tunes of your favorite song.
Published 2nd Feb 2020
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 2
comments 10
reads 904
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
2nd Feb 2020 2:30pm
<< post removed >>
7th Feb 2020 1:57pm
2nd Feb 2020 6:47pm
Fewer words needed is a good sign - as its a mark of good compatability. Nice to read you again. Best regards, Josh.
7th Feb 2020 1:57pm
Yes, absolutely. Thank you for your kind comment.
Good to read those again, Josh.
Delanee
Good to read those again, Josh.
Delanee
3rd Feb 2020 2:31am
Dear D,
Stunning in its brevity and charming of subject. An absolutely lovely read. Brava!
H🌷
Stunning in its brevity and charming of subject. An absolutely lovely read. Brava!
H🌷
7th Feb 2020 1:58pm
5th Feb 2020 5:17pm
Hi Delanee. This is lovely work. The direct diatribe has a kind of candid resonance about it. I would be thrilled if you would consider sending an audio of this poem to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. An audio poem has fuller dimensions, with your unique vocal inflections, and the feature may draw attention to your poems on site, help forge new friendships. If you would be amenable, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the title of the poem, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
10th Feb 2020 3:15pm
8th Oct 2020 3:10pm
There is a sayin...
"Whats understood, don't need to be explained"
I agree and this personifies that completely
"Whats understood, don't need to be explained"
I agree and this personifies that completely
9th Oct 2020 8:59am
That statement sure fits this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Glad you enjoyed this piece!
🌻 Delanee.
Glad you enjoyed this piece!
🌻 Delanee.
