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Poetry on High : Volume III
I shed my skin tonight.
In the morning you will still know me
You won't notice the fundamental changes.
For the better.
For worse.
For ever.
The game and its rules keep changing.
But I will always remember fondly
When this 'I' was me.
In the morning you will still know me
You won't notice the fundamental changes.
For the better.
For worse.
For ever.
The game and its rules keep changing.
But I will always remember fondly
When this 'I' was me.
Published 13th Jan 2020
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14th Jan 2020 00:58am
Brava Delanee! I really like the theme of constant rebirth in this piece. I find the last passage profound.
7th Feb 2020 2:02pm
It's a theme I like to think about sometimes. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. That means a lot!
Delanee
Delanee
14th Jan 2020 7:05pm
Dear D,
Those mental changes are the deepest most hidden changes to bring forward, if we ever do. Very reflective and truthful write. Your last stanza wraps up the feelings brilliantly. Lovely! H🌷
Those mental changes are the deepest most hidden changes to bring forward, if we ever do. Very reflective and truthful write. Your last stanza wraps up the feelings brilliantly. Lovely! H🌷
7th Feb 2020 2:03pm
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