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I grabbed him like he was mine
Glanced at his tattoo
In that moment he was mine
Brief
Memories fade
But I'm familiar with every mark on this beast
A distant voice in my head
Telling me....
Somewhere between time and space...
He took me there.
At one time this beast was mine
Ahhh another love story
In that moment he was mine
Brief
Memories fade
But I'm familiar with every mark on this beast
A distant voice in my head
Telling me....
Somewhere between time and space...
He took me there.
At one time this beast was mine
Ahhh another love story
Author's Note
A brief encounter many years ago
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Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
31st Jan 2020 4:08pm
Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
1st Feb 2020 1:17pm
Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
1st Feb 2020 1:24pm
This was from an innocent hug the other day. . .Been running into ex's lately.
Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
1st Feb 2020 1:47pm
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Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
Anonymous
6th Feb 2020 4:11pm
A very captivating poem, Diz.

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Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
28th Feb 2020 6:47am
So much contained in these few words of a memory you savour. Favourite line, for its quasi biblical ring and the hint of having seen a lot of that person:
I'm familiar with every mark on this beast
I'm familiar with every mark on this beast
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Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
Anonymous
20th Jun 2020 7:00am
You commented on a poem of mine, so I thought that I would comment on one of yours. I had to read through 12 little thoughts of yours, or whatever you call them, to get to this one that actually might be a little something. Then I noticed that this is your fuck around ID so it doesn't matter. Anyway good luck at NA, never did anything for me. I will give this bit of advice, if your on methadone, which I was for 12 years. Wean yourself off as fast as possible. I did it cold turkey with the help of Imodium AD, look it up. And if it's meth, Heaven help you. Anyway that's all I got, sorry for rambling but I missed my NA meeting tonight, if you know what I mean. ;) and maybe, why don't you try to add a few rhymes, so it doesn't just sound like you talking. Hehe, Peace

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Re: Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
Hey boo
I've never done heroin
Or methadone
My fuck around ID? I wish I had a fuck around I'd. I have when people assume stuff.
As long as I'm single
I got that right
As far as meetings I was there last night and the night before...
My random thoughts is because I write in the journal category
Where random thoughts usually go.
Well what am I supposed to do to entertain myself while your busy stalking?
Sheesh...
I've never done heroin
Or methadone
My fuck around ID? I wish I had a fuck around I'd. I have when people assume stuff.
As long as I'm single
I got that right
As far as meetings I was there last night and the night before...
My random thoughts is because I write in the journal category
Where random thoughts usually go.
Well what am I supposed to do to entertain myself while your busy stalking?
Sheesh...
Re: Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
Anonymous
20th Jun 2020 8:06am
Random thoughts might belong in that journal but they don't belong on a Poetry site, that's what I've been saying. Because a random thought is not a poem and neither is a story for some kind philosophy you might have on the world.

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Re: Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
20th Jun 2020 8:23am
sorry beautiful poetess but I had to say something... hello dearest Beaver that's not very nice she's got a story to tell in her own unique voice you know...I think sharing it with us is beautiful... poetry can mean a lot of things to a lot of people it's subjective as it's one of the arts...
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Re: Re. I grabbed him like he was mine
Anonymous
20th Jun 2020 8:34am
Why do you people try to usurp the word poetry? Here is the Webster's Dictionary definition of poem:
po·em
/ˈpōəm,pōm/
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noun
a piece of writing that partakes of the nature of both speech and song that is nearly always rhythmical, usually metaphorical, and often exhibits such formal elements as meter, rhyme, and stanzaic structure.
Poetry has rules. it's not whatever you whatever it to be. I'm not criticizing what they're saying and in fact it might be good, but it's not poetry.
po·em
/ˈpōəm,pōm/
Learn to pronounce
noun
a piece of writing that partakes of the nature of both speech and song that is nearly always rhythmical, usually metaphorical, and often exhibits such formal elements as meter, rhyme, and stanzaic structure.
Poetry has rules. it's not whatever you whatever it to be. I'm not criticizing what they're saying and in fact it might be good, but it's not poetry.

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