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Arrowed
.
Arrowed with purpose, she'd agree,
upon her descent, rise, aim & release,
yes, she'd agree, some dreams have
a fluidity of visual beauty, like one was
really there.
Arrowed with purpose, she'd agree,
upon her descent, rise, aim & release,
yes, she'd agree, some dreams have
a fluidity of visual beauty, like one was
really there.
Published 27th Jan 2020
Author's Note
Some dreams are worthy of prolonging as long as possible
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27th Jan 2020 12:00pm
27th Jan 2020 12:08pm
27th Jan 2020 2:36pm
Love dreams like that—they linger on and on throughout the day. I enjoyed the natural flow of rhyme, which seemed unforced.
27th Jan 2020 2:37pm
27th Jan 2020 3:09pm
Love the flow of the dream as it lingers within the depth of the heart...respect
27th Jan 2020 3:39pm
27th Jan 2020 4:15pm
28th Jan 2020 7:38am
Dreams during afternoon naps are the best, most vivid, sometimes sensual, and long lasting. I am happy you had such a serene dream and feel lucky that you've shared it with us in such an elegant fashion.
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