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SKY ODESSA
"In the Deep Azure Skies"...
Is a hidden sea in disguise
Swimming through are fish birds
"Mermaids Glide Backwards"...
"Smooth Art in Pastels"...
The clouds share their trails
To the creatures secret Sky Odessa
"Lucent's Oceana"...
Written by
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
(WRITER LYRICIST ARTIST)
Published 25th Jan 2020
Author's Note
A POEM ABOUT THE SKY BEING A HIDDEN SEA OF MYSTICAL SEA CREATURES.. THE PICTURE IS MINE OF REAL SKY SKY AND WITH CLOUDS EDITED ON PICSART WITH FILTERS AND FANTASY STICKERS.
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Re. SKY ODESSA
25th Jan 2020 1:39am
the enchantment of the universe
and of how far we can see......perceive..........
all the beings EXIST
even if our 3rd eye is sleeping.
and of how far we can see......perceive..........
all the beings EXIST
even if our 3rd eye is sleeping.
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Re: Re. SKY ODESSA
25th Jan 2020 1:49am
Thanks hun, I love this piece is a first for sky sea fantasy and it's like I can see that beautiful view in my mind ❤
Yes in our mind anything will exist haha...
Thanks for liking hun 🤗❤
Yes in our mind anything will exist haha...
Thanks for liking hun 🤗❤
Re: Re. SKY ODESSA
25th Jan 2020 1:52am
i love Your perspective
even if i see something entirely different
You didn't beat me up in the beginning and
so now i am liken to a barnacle to Your
whale shark leather.
: )
even if i see something entirely different
You didn't beat me up in the beginning and
so now i am liken to a barnacle to Your
whale shark leather.
: )
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Re: Re. SKY ODESSA
25th Jan 2020 2:19am
Awww thanks hun.
The sea is beautiful but I wouldn't want swim in it cause I'm too scared of sharks lol
But it's beautiful and respect it's existence. 🤗
The sea is beautiful but I wouldn't want swim in it cause I'm too scared of sharks lol
But it's beautiful and respect it's existence. 🤗
Re: Re. SKY ODESSA
25th Jan 2020 2:23am
Whale Sharks, being the largest Fish known,
eat only tiny shrimp and plankton.
One might feel comfortable gliding along a whale shark and feel a superficial safe aura.
eat only tiny shrimp and plankton.
One might feel comfortable gliding along a whale shark and feel a superficial safe aura.
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Re: Re. SKY ODESSA
25th Jan 2020 2:49am
Honestly I'd still be very scared lol
One don't know what they can do
I just rather respect their territory especially the harmless sharks lol
One don't know what they can do
I just rather respect their territory especially the harmless sharks lol
Re. SKY ODESSA
25th Jan 2020 11:30am
i loved this so beautiful spoken of imagination and the art speaks for itself well done dear poetess..respect
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Re: Re. SKY ODESSA
25th Jan 2020 1:52pm
Thank you so much, I actually made this for the sky contest to be over today. I decided to enter last minute lol well even though I may not win, I'm happy I created a beautiful short challenging poem. I even like it but it was very hard to do too. The imagination was one thing and the writing of right words was another. I wanted something very unique and makes one feel the inner feeling of the poem and made it in art with one of my sky old pics of my favorite one with sun glaring very strong. I love taking sky pics the sun and the clouds too.
Thanks for loving it 🤗❤
Thanks for loving it 🤗❤
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25th Jan 2020 2:55pm
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26th Jan 2020 1:05am
Thank you so much, I just got home from a long day out with my daughter at the winterfest for kids so had fun. 🙂
Re: Re. SKY ODESSA
26th Jan 2020 5:08am
that was very beautiful for the two of you to do its nice to hear that you got a chance to enjoy the time...respect
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26th Jan 2020 6:06am
Re: Re. SKY ODESSA
26th Jan 2020 10:35am
i can understand that fosho its best to not be there sometimes around the drama and stress i totally agree with you on that statement...respect
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Re. SKY ODESSA
26th Jan 2020 11:00pm
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26th Jan 2020 11:52pm
Re. SKY ODESSA
27th Jan 2020 6:21pm
Re: Re. SKY ODESSA
27th Jan 2020 6:43pm
Thanks hun I do myself and i know Atlantis city existed lol
Thank you for liking 🤗
Thank you for liking 🤗