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DEAR AMAZING LORD
DEAR AMAZING LORD,
PLEASE TAKE A MOMENT TO READ MY WORDS:
I know I have been weak...
and don't have a face to show for
But hear me now as I abundantly speak
I'm sorry if I have offended you and nothing or words could change my mistakes, as in life i opened each door....
but in high of your powerful floor...
My voice in writing i implore
To compassion this letter of my testimony and more..
I write to you to thank you for my daughter and family
My health and precious life
The humble roof you put over my head endlessly
Your light I see this morning with no price
Birds chirping in harmony heavenly..
The times I suffered and you always soothed my pains that agonised scaring me entirely
You were secretly always there....
In hard crying I let weakness tear me easily.
But you almighty and good with your preaching I heard recognizing, you do sincerely care.
AND EVEN LIKE THAT...
Many times I never did pray
Many times I didn't thank you
Many times I just ignored to say
How much I appreciate and honor all you
seriously do...
In my bad fate tormenting cries
To my laughter I could to heal my eyes
Forgetting you as I even said to humans goodbyes...
I am happy you still made time for me as time wasting flies
In so much of your merciful blessings...
I allowed my light in consent to dies
Drawing many occasions to fall in my sins
All the infinity of stupidity lies
Nothing like that or ignorance wins
I know I am not perfect and not made to be gold that will shine
That you know I am not...
But I am a sinner your sinner in a black line.
Only got a poor gentle heart that can carelessly rot...
But I don't want to let darkness control my self-value and only faith I got...
--You know who precisely I am
a single mom woman
Doing all that I can--
I want to be a good child as I have an angel in flesh in sweet light
To be so much giving and less receiving
To conquer all struggles with a strong faithful fight.
To do all what is truthfully right...
In respects to day or night...
Ignoring the wicked and all the deceiving.
Please erase my bad thoughts and all it's meaning
"I know i have complained in all to this day"
But know that I keep you in my mind all the time.
In moments I breathe to winds chime
To when I find by surprise a simple helpful dime
The feeling of having you in my heart is so divine.
I know that in your blessed name things will be just fine.
PLEASE TAKE A MOMENT TO READ MY WORDS:
I know I have been weak...
and don't have a face to show for
But hear me now as I abundantly speak
I'm sorry if I have offended you and nothing or words could change my mistakes, as in life i opened each door....
but in high of your powerful floor...
My voice in writing i implore
To compassion this letter of my testimony and more..
I write to you to thank you for my daughter and family
My health and precious life
The humble roof you put over my head endlessly
Your light I see this morning with no price
Birds chirping in harmony heavenly..
The times I suffered and you always soothed my pains that agonised scaring me entirely
You were secretly always there....
In hard crying I let weakness tear me easily.
But you almighty and good with your preaching I heard recognizing, you do sincerely care.
AND EVEN LIKE THAT...
Many times I never did pray
Many times I didn't thank you
Many times I just ignored to say
How much I appreciate and honor all you
seriously do...
In my bad fate tormenting cries
To my laughter I could to heal my eyes
Forgetting you as I even said to humans goodbyes...
I am happy you still made time for me as time wasting flies
In so much of your merciful blessings...
I allowed my light in consent to dies
Drawing many occasions to fall in my sins
All the infinity of stupidity lies
Nothing like that or ignorance wins
I know I am not perfect and not made to be gold that will shine
That you know I am not...
But I am a sinner your sinner in a black line.
Only got a poor gentle heart that can carelessly rot...
But I don't want to let darkness control my self-value and only faith I got...
--You know who precisely I am
a single mom woman
Doing all that I can--
I want to be a good child as I have an angel in flesh in sweet light
To be so much giving and less receiving
To conquer all struggles with a strong faithful fight.
To do all what is truthfully right...
In respects to day or night...
Ignoring the wicked and all the deceiving.
Please erase my bad thoughts and all it's meaning
"I know i have complained in all to this day"
But know that I keep you in my mind all the time.
In moments I breathe to winds chime
To when I find by surprise a simple helpful dime
The feeling of having you in my heart is so divine.
I know that in your blessed name things will be just fine.
Published 25th Jan 2020
Author's Note
MY PERSONAL LETTER TO GOD, MY FIRST TO DO SO AND FOR THE GOD AND ME LETTER CONTEST
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25th Jan 2020 5:35pm
This is very enlightening and beautiful for they say confession is good for the mind and heart and soul...respect
26th Jan 2020 1:26am
Thank you so much Stoney, it actually is and i feel that what I did in this poem. Felt good to do so. Never wrote like that to God so it was a great opportunity to do.
I wrote that in morning really fast and can't believe i could finish being rushed timed lol
I wrote that in morning really fast and can't believe i could finish being rushed timed lol
26th Jan 2020 5:06am
26th Jan 2020 6:04am
26th Jan 2020 10:36am
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26th Jan 2020 2:54pm
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26th Jan 2020 3:30pm
Thank you so much hun, writing it in a fast pace moment wasn't easy lol. But i managed to write it and say my own words and still rhyme it. It's how it seriously is for me in poem so i wrote it as i felt it in me. My first letter to God and feels great i did.
Yes he gives all to do as we will and in the end of time he will judge upon our choices in life we ever made. We all die and will have to face the lord one day to be judged when that time is to be.
Thanks for liking hun 🤗
Yes he gives all to do as we will and in the end of time he will judge upon our choices in life we ever made. We all die and will have to face the lord one day to be judged when that time is to be.
Thanks for liking hun 🤗
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26th Jan 2020 5:08pm
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