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Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
Wish my beard was all silver
My scars a little less obvious
My heart bursting with joy
Your friendship heals all
That’s what I love about you
I never wear red
Unless it’s for you
My scars a little less obvious
My heart bursting with joy
Your friendship heals all
That’s what I love about you
I never wear red
Unless it’s for you
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Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 00:40am
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22nd Jan 2020 00:51am
Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 00:56am
Coming from you, dear... that's romantic...
Worth it's weight in gold... H... Ely
Worth it's weight in gold... H... Ely
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22nd Jan 2020 1:06am
Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 1:18am
There's that Scorpio romantic side that will melt any heart!
P.S. - Red is one of our colors next to black. Wear it proudly!
P.S. - Red is one of our colors next to black. Wear it proudly!
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Re: Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 2:13am
it was an xmas present
I would never choose red myself
it looks good though under a black v neck merino wool sweater
here I went raw and full metal jacket
Thanks A
I would never choose red myself
it looks good though under a black v neck merino wool sweater
here I went raw and full metal jacket
Thanks A
Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 3:12am
Awwww..... lovely! I knew there was a big squishy-heart in there.
Red is best. 🙂
Red is best. 🙂
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22nd Jan 2020 3:25am
Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2020 6:44am
Honest, vulnerable, sensational ink!
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22nd Jan 2020 12:33pm
Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 11:39am
a very romantic piece of sensual thoughts of returning the love and appreciation for a gift...respect
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Re: Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 12:37pm
It's kind of a sexy color but the last one I would choose to wear unless of course it were a gift ....
Thank you Stoney
Thank you Stoney
Re: Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 12:40pm
red is sexy i agree but when its given as a gift that makes it very special as a gift from the heart...respect
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Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 1:31pm
Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2020 1:34pm
A helluva piece, my friend! Again, your style that respects the value of words is a refreshing one!
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Re: Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 1:57pm
A beautiful comment Mister
You know how it goes, you get a fragment of a thought and then the rest just flows ...
I would love to write flowery verse but I’m just a slice and dice value guy .....
You know how it goes, you get a fragment of a thought and then the rest just flows ...
I would love to write flowery verse but I’m just a slice and dice value guy .....
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2020 4:25pm
PoetSpeak, Take your style & turn it insight-out...now you've got my outrageously jejune "poetry." Though the older I get, the less I believe in what I write. I thoroughly appreciate your work!
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Re: Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
22nd Jan 2020 9:42pm
I throughly appreciate that you like my writing.
I started this journey 6 years ago, it's been a wild ride.
A few months ago I changed a few things in how I end poems. I used to like to sum everything up and have a tidy crisp ending.
Now I want to leave it open and exposed. It helps to keep me centered. I used to be angrier. Age mellows one out. I'm an old buck now but I'm still in the game.
THANK YOU MISTER !!!
I started this journey 6 years ago, it's been a wild ride.
A few months ago I changed a few things in how I end poems. I used to like to sum everything up and have a tidy crisp ending.
Now I want to leave it open and exposed. It helps to keep me centered. I used to be angrier. Age mellows one out. I'm an old buck now but I'm still in the game.
THANK YOU MISTER !!!
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2020 11:05pm
I hear you... whatever you're doing, keep it up! Seems to be working for your poetry and your psyche.
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Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
23rd Jan 2020 1:18am
Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
23rd Jan 2020 1:33am
Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
23rd Jan 2020 12:03pm
The scars, dents and smiles are what help shape who we are. I love that you opened yourself up like this. Not often done, it’s beautiful.
I’m with you on the red, not my color either, but when it is given as a gift...you see it from the eyes of another.
—B
I’m with you on the red, not my color either, but when it is given as a gift...you see it from the eyes of another.
—B
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Re: Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
23rd Jan 2020 1:04pm
I noticed a few new dents in my forehead recently,
For some reason I thought I should report that to the DUP community. Aging is a funny thing and you have to keep your sense of humor about it.
I appreciate your comment Bonzi
Thank you !!
For some reason I thought I should report that to the DUP community. Aging is a funny thing and you have to keep your sense of humor about it.
I appreciate your comment Bonzi
Thank you !!
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26th Jan 2020 4:37am
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26th Jan 2020 11:51am
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7th Feb 2020 1:03pm
Re: Re. Scars, Dents, Life Marks ( Self-Portrait)
7th Feb 2020 1:16pm
A few weeks ago I swore I would never wear this shirt and now I wear it all the time. It's a power shirt no doubt ...
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