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Breather
Phone rings
99 percent of the time it's spam
This time a breather
Hoping it's Patty from 1968
99 percent of the time it's spam
This time a breather
Hoping it's Patty from 1968
Published 29th Jan 2020
Author's Note
Take what's given ....
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2020 11:36pm
Always take what’s been given brother.
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Anonymous
31st Jan 2020 10:31pm
More of your distinctive, compact work that says 10X more than the words written. This one has a sly, oblique, personal element which makes it "especially special"! Great jon!
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8th Feb 2020 8:05pm
That made me laugh out loud. We don't get too many breathers nowadays, so it's kind of refreshing so to speak.
Hope Patty gets to read this.
Hope Patty gets to read this.
