The Story of A Scar (Quatrain)

Damn good. 👏🌹

Thank you

Sadness turned into something real... touching

I had a movie in the back of my mind - company of wolves - not sure why it led to this

Really enjoyed how this concluded, given the darker implications of the earlier passages.

All stories need a happy ending - glad it wasn't too twee for you

Twee?

affectedly  sentimental.

Thanks for the schooling on an unknown word.  And surprisingly, I enjoy the sentimental.

No that is a dark glimpse into acceptance and redemption.
Nice, though. And thought provoking

I wonder what thoughts were provoked?

To find that one that releases you from all previous scars and pain. To identify this is what is happening is when acceptance and the release happens. You can meet your savior every day but if you don't accept him or her then you continue as is, tight

a fairy tale but not in New York

Not really a fairy tale, it's about not building the walls of defense up so high that you cant see when aide instead of another attack approaches

They've got cars big as bars
They've got rivers of gold
But the wind goes right through you
It's no place for the old
When you first took my hand
On a cold New York Eve
You promised me
Broadway was waiting for me

You were handsome
You were pretty
Queen of New York City
When the band finished playing
They howled out for more
Sinatra was swinging,
All the drunks they were singing
We kissed on a corner
Then danced through the night

okay, and enjoyed last response

Enjoyment is good

deep as it is sad but yet to the point of a story of seen and unseen scars if this is apart of your story, you are an survivor as well as an fighter to resurface with so much strenght and courage to become the woman that you are today...respect dear poetess

read between the lines for the unseen ones - smiles

that i shall do dear poetess i enjoy a good book to read written by a story teller of unspoken words...respect

love the way you pen in the restraints of the style
enjoy your work
and allowing me into your  "dark,
erotic dream"

I wish the form allowed a further stanza to develop the gentle side - but there will be other verses to come in one form or another

What a wonderful ending of being made love to in a gentle and loving way. Glad this is just a fantasy my darling. But that finale ending on a harmonious note gave the dark dream a climax to remember.

XoXoXo
John

the rough and the smooth integrate nicely sometimes