Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
12th Jan 2020 10:13am
My, my, my, sweet... Such a pleasurable piece to read - very sensual. I loved it! The brevity was actual a plus in this case :)
12th Jan 2020 10:18am
I re-write again and again -
there's a limit in all that one blames:
Are pentameters iambic?
Are similes handy?
As another damned sonnet constrains
there's a limit in all that one blames:
Are pentameters iambic?
Are similes handy?
As another damned sonnet constrains
12th Jan 2020 10:19am
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F1lJFlB-89Q
Sorry... I couldn't resist, lol
Sorry... I couldn't resist, lol
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As she throws a friendship since she was twelve right down the drain. Sorry any trust now gone. Yeah thanks daddy. It always helps to weed them out
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when you see someone with true gut potential you inspire them to there true vision of life...respect
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25th Jan 2020 11:20am
thank you dear poetess for the comment i call it as i see it with honesty...respect
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25th Jan 2020 4:31pm
all those damned side walks:
will they never get to behave
just as you want them
will they never get to behave
just as you want them
12th Jan 2020 7:44pm
Bouncing read:
..and I will hear, forever. every slap
with cock in cunt, and flesh to flesh....
..and I will hear, forever. every slap
with cock in cunt, and flesh to flesh....
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13th Mar 2020 8:03pm
You give old guys like me something to dream about. This was a rollicking delight of a frolic. Beneath those skirts lies paradise. ;-)
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
