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Untitled 1/7/20
I can't help but smile
Everytime I see you
Time moves slower
And all my worries fade away
I melt in your embrace
Not wanting to ever leave your warmth
The ease of how we talk is relaxing
Knowing nothing can change how we feel inside
Everytime I see you
Time moves slower
And all my worries fade away
I melt in your embrace
Not wanting to ever leave your warmth
The ease of how we talk is relaxing
Knowing nothing can change how we feel inside
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7th Jan 2020 12:40pm
UNBREAKABLE BOND...beautifully composed with depth and love dear poetess...respect
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7th Jan 2020 7:46pm
Echo Stoney223, Favourite lines :
I melt in your embrace
Not wanting to ever leave your warmth
If this is someone you have met, bless him.
I melt in your embrace
Not wanting to ever leave your warmth
If this is someone you have met, bless him.
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7th Jan 2020 10:48pm
Brava, Marina! Romantic piece. I was most touched by this passage,
”Time moves slower
And all my worries fade away"
”Time moves slower
And all my worries fade away"
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