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Touching Tag
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I can't recall who won;
The street was long &
distance prevailed to
a shimmering disappearance,
once the corner, they did stop,
before kissing interrupted their
game,
upon their seperate
departures, they did fade.
I can't recall who won, but I'm
thinking he went away knowing
he was it.
I can't recall who won;
The street was long &
distance prevailed to
a shimmering disappearance,
once the corner, they did stop,
before kissing interrupted their
game,
upon their seperate
departures, they did fade.
I can't recall who won, but I'm
thinking he went away knowing
he was it.
Author's Note
To witness lovers at play, breeds happiness in my heart
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6th Jan 2020 12:34pm
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6th Jan 2020 12:37pm
beautiful thoughts of love it just reassure one that love is still rare as it does still exist within the heart of the mind and soul...respect
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6th Jan 2020 8:05pm
Seems they were mutually "it."😁 That would be my preferred tag procedure. Although as children it would have been a guaranteed recipe for cooties
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6th Jan 2020 8:36pm
Well it was the morning time, I'm guessing it would have continued later on
Who knows right 🤗👍
Who knows right 🤗👍
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8th Jan 2020 00:04am
I adore this poem! I love the observational nature of it - you captured the play wonderfully.
There is nothing like watching two lovers. I read something once, it was the second most beautiful thing I'd ever read, about how the world ceased turning and the crowds split in reverence when two lovers walked by. I would give anything to find that again.
There is nothing like watching two lovers. I read something once, it was the second most beautiful thing I'd ever read, about how the world ceased turning and the crowds split in reverence when two lovers walked by. I would give anything to find that again.
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8th Jan 2020 5:56am
Exactly
Many such beautiful loving moments to witness,
Unfortunately many too busy to see, or just don't, for some unexplainable reason see what is beautiful
👍👌🤗
Many such beautiful loving moments to witness,
Unfortunately many too busy to see, or just don't, for some unexplainable reason see what is beautiful
👍👌🤗