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Fallen Angels
( after Langston Hughes )
I’m waken’d by a po’em in my head,
Recitin’ in a rhyme of my own kin.
A rhythm that I’m dancin’ in my bed,
A black man in a coffee-flavored skin.
To see me on a slave ship below deck,
I’m waken’d by a po’em in my head.
An’ here we are a-pitchin’ till we retch,
I pray I’m only dreamin’ an’ not dead.
The ship is swallowed in a sky of red,
As if ol’ Satan’s army is a swarm.
I’m waken’d by a po’em in my head,
The cries of fallen angels in the storm.
To all the slaves each turnin’ on a wheel
As ev’ry chain an’ shackle now is shed.
A time to kill becomes a time to heal,
I’m waken’d by a po’em in my head.
I’m waken’d by a po’em in my head,
Recitin’ in a rhyme of my own kin.
A rhythm that I’m dancin’ in my bed,
A black man in a coffee-flavored skin.
To see me on a slave ship below deck,
I’m waken’d by a po’em in my head.
An’ here we are a-pitchin’ till we retch,
I pray I’m only dreamin’ an’ not dead.
The ship is swallowed in a sky of red,
As if ol’ Satan’s army is a swarm.
I’m waken’d by a po’em in my head,
The cries of fallen angels in the storm.
To all the slaves each turnin’ on a wheel
As ev’ry chain an’ shackle now is shed.
A time to kill becomes a time to heal,
I’m waken’d by a po’em in my head.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 2nd Jan 2020
Author's Note
131 words
Inspired by a dream that was literally speaking this poem to me after an intense evening of reading Langston Hughes poetry which included:
“Let America Be America Again”, “I, Too”, “I look at the world””, “Freedom”, “Hope”, “The Negro Speaks of Rivers”, “Remember”, “Who but the Lord?”, “You and your whole race.”.
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/langston-hughes#tab-poems
For the Classic Corner’s tribute “We Are Beautiful and Ugly Too” co-hosted by JohnnyBlaze and Ahavati.
Inspired by a dream that was literally speaking this poem to me after an intense evening of reading Langston Hughes poetry which included:
“Let America Be America Again”, “I, Too”, “I look at the world””, “Freedom”, “Hope”, “The Negro Speaks of Rivers”, “Remember”, “Who but the Lord?”, “You and your whole race.”.
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/langston-hughes#tab-poems
For the Classic Corner’s tribute “We Are Beautiful and Ugly Too” co-hosted by JohnnyBlaze and Ahavati.
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Re. Fallen Angels
2nd Jan 2020 00:40am
Re: Re. Fallen Angels
2nd Jan 2020 00:47am
Thank you, sweet Kitty sister...
Maybe one day it truly will — for everybody, everywhere.💌
Jade🐾💌
Maybe one day it truly will — for everybody, everywhere.💌
Jade🐾💌
Re. Fallen Angels
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2020 00:42am
Ahhhh, Jade....Shades of the Harlem Renaissance! Well done with style, class and yes, a soulful bent! Thanks for sharing!
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2nd Jan 2020 00:52am
Dear Poet,
My grateful thanks to your appreciation & support of my humble nod to Langston Hughes.🙏🏻
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My grateful thanks to your appreciation & support of my humble nod to Langston Hughes.🙏🏻
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2nd Jan 2020 2:27am
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Re: Re. Fallen Angels
2nd Jan 2020 4:15am
That’s exactly what I hoped you’d do, ma fille.
And I thank you for coming here to read the word, and honoring it with your recommend.🙏🏻
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And I thank you for coming here to read the word, and honoring it with your recommend.🙏🏻
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Re. Fallen Angels
2nd Jan 2020 3:46am
Dear JP,
Wow!! You have been channeled from poetry heaven or something. I’m pretty sure if that ever happened to me I’d forget whatever was in my head before I could find pen and paper. This is extremely impressive. And what a journey you’ve taken us on. This is a slam dunk but I’ll wish you good luck in the comp.
H🌷
Wow!! You have been channeled from poetry heaven or something. I’m pretty sure if that ever happened to me I’d forget whatever was in my head before I could find pen and paper. This is extremely impressive. And what a journey you’ve taken us on. This is a slam dunk but I’ll wish you good luck in the comp.
H🌷
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Aaw dearest Honoria, having you join me on this historic trip... a spill that was gifted to me. As I quickly rose in the soft morning light of my bed, I grabbed a pad & pen on the nightstand to scribble hastily as the words continued to murmur. I’ve had this happen a number of times through the year, and now in the new year. But this is the most of a poem I’ve ever captured in this way. What I missed I was able to fill in the blanks in mere minutes.
Yes, a true blessing.🙏🏻
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Yes, a true blessing.🙏🏻
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Re. Fallen Angels
2nd Jan 2020 5:01am
Quatrains have special magic that evokes in a poem so designed. Our fourth dimension material view mirrors in the quadradic musing...
love such as always
J
love such as always
J
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Thank you very much, dear Jeff, I know well what you mean.
This piece is written in the poetic structure with decending refrain of the Quatern, one of my favorite formulaics.☺️
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This piece is written in the poetic structure with decending refrain of the Quatern, one of my favorite formulaics.☺️
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Re: Re. Fallen Angels
8th Jan 2020 2:20pm
Apologies for this late reply, my friend, for I have been weaving in & out of illness for over a month, so I try to write in response when I don’t feel so woozy.
Your words along with his are a gift so beautiful, touching my poet’s heart. I thank you for this.🙏🏻
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Your words along with his are a gift so beautiful, touching my poet’s heart. I thank you for this.🙏🏻
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Re. Fallen Angels
2nd Jan 2020 11:15am
through freedom we sing like angels given wings to fly above the skies where heaven awaits our spiritual soul as we are reborn in human form to sing forever more nicely composed poetess...respect
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Re: Re. Fallen Angels
8th Jan 2020 2:25pm
Apologies for this late reply, my friend, for I have been weaving in & out of illness for over a month, so I try to write in response when I don’t feel so woozy.
Dear brother Stoney, your words you always give to me are filled with insightful inspiration, and I thank you most graciously.🙏🏻
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Dear brother Stoney, your words you always give to me are filled with insightful inspiration, and I thank you most graciously.🙏🏻
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Re: Re. Fallen Angels
9th Jan 2020 12:30pm
thank you for your words no problem poetess i am just glad that your getting better being sick is draining of the soul it takes alot out of one you just take of yourself and focus on you getting to your true potential...one love with respect dear poetess
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Re. Fallen Angels
6th Jan 2020 11:14pm
Those last two lines were spectacular. I know that in these quaterns closing lines are coming but you paired it so perfectly with "A time to kill becomes a time to heal".
Well done Ms Jade.
Good luck in the comp.
Well done Ms Jade.
Good luck in the comp.
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6th Jan 2020 11:32pm
My gosh, my friend, I’m filled with a gladness that seems to have affected a fever I had awakened with this morning. Your words are having a healing effect on me.
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