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Sweet Release...
Sweet release
Slams into me;
I'm reeling
With the feeling,
It's intensity
Is quite overwhelming
And I'm just here reveling
Deeply in it's splendor...
Delicious
Thickness
Stretches my pussy;
Sweetly
Stroking my core...
Sliding
In and out of this pussy;
Kindly
Demanding
More...
Knowing
What's in store
Makes my need
For that sweet release
To slam into me...
Reeling
From feeling
Such intensity...
Can't help needing
More...
Slams into me;
I'm reeling
With the feeling,
It's intensity
Is quite overwhelming
And I'm just here reveling
Deeply in it's splendor...
Delicious
Thickness
Stretches my pussy;
Sweetly
Stroking my core...
Sliding
In and out of this pussy;
Kindly
Demanding
More...
Knowing
What's in store
Makes my need
For that sweet release
To slam into me...
Reeling
From feeling
Such intensity...
Can't help needing
More...
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Wow...
31st Dec 2011 7:09am
re: Wow...
31st Dec 2011 3:14pm
i liked it
31st Dec 2011 11:17am
re: i liked it
31st Dec 2011 3:16pm
mmmmmmmmmmmmm
Anonymous
31st Dec 2011 3:31pm
so sensual a write - intense feelings you have there - quite enjoyed my dear - welcome to this DU I know you will love it here - ^v^
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re: mmmmmmmmmmmmm
14th Jan 2012 9:40pm
Nice :)
Anonymous
31st Dec 2011 5:44pm
Hot and Intense...Just the way I like it ;) Great Write
1
re: Nice :)
14th Jan 2012 9:38pm
re: Sweet Release
Anonymous
1st Jan 2012 3:07am
Lyricallady,
Enjoyed, Loved your lines:
Delicious
Thickness
Stretches my pussy;
Sweetly
Stroking my core...
Thanks for sharing.
tornado
Enjoyed, Loved your lines:
Delicious
Thickness
Stretches my pussy;
Sweetly
Stroking my core...
Thanks for sharing.
tornado
1
re: re: Sweet Release
Oh well you know I get inspired every now and again, that's all...Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reading.:)
Meaningful!!!!
2nd Jan 2012 5:57am
The words u choose was on point...if I may say so myself.....enjoyed it!!!
1
re: Meaningful!!!!
14th Jan 2012 9:43pm
Re: Sweet Release...
18th Jun 2013 00:04am
Sensuous and erotic without being crude or overly explict. That's hard to achive but you've done it nicely here. Well done poet!
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