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Use my heart
You played me
Like a puppet.
You fucked up
My strings.
I did all that you
Wanted.
Even
All your dirty things.
I guess I’m weak and
Foolish.
For believing
In the better things.
You’re poisoning
Is gone now.Don’t care what
you’re tomorrow
Brings.
You hide your lies....
Behind beautiful eyes.....
I was to blind to See.....
What you’ve done to me....
Use my heart and rape it!
Fuck my trust and break it!
You know it should be a crime !
For what you did to me inside!
I can no longer take it
Use my heart and rape it.
Tangled up together
In a relentless knot.
Pain was your
Sickening Purpose.
It was All I ever got.
I guess I’m just a promise
For you to break.
I gave you all of me
And you chose
to be fake.
You hide your lies....
Behind beautiful eyes...
And I’m to blind to see....
What you’ve done to me....
Use my heart and rape it!
Fuck my trust and break it!
You know it should be a crime!
For what you do to me inside!
I can no longer take it
Use my heart and rape it.
Like a puppet.
You fucked up
My strings.
I did all that you
Wanted.
Even
All your dirty things.
I guess I’m weak and
Foolish.
For believing
In the better things.
You’re poisoning
Is gone now.Don’t care what
you’re tomorrow
Brings.
You hide your lies....
Behind beautiful eyes.....
I was to blind to See.....
What you’ve done to me....
Use my heart and rape it!
Fuck my trust and break it!
You know it should be a crime !
For what you did to me inside!
I can no longer take it
Use my heart and rape it.
Tangled up together
In a relentless knot.
Pain was your
Sickening Purpose.
It was All I ever got.
I guess I’m just a promise
For you to break.
I gave you all of me
And you chose
to be fake.
You hide your lies....
Behind beautiful eyes...
And I’m to blind to see....
What you’ve done to me....
Use my heart and rape it!
Fuck my trust and break it!
You know it should be a crime!
For what you do to me inside!
I can no longer take it
Use my heart and rape it.
Published 29th Dec 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Jan 2020 5:45pm
29th Dec 2019 8:59pm
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30th Dec 2019 00:57am
30th Dec 2019 1:31am
I like how this poem starts in a grey area and slowly gets darker. I love the strength in this poem.
30th Dec 2019 3:31am
We all have that point.
I'm sorry she hurt you as badly as she did. You didn't deserve it.
I'm sorry she hurt you as badly as she did. You didn't deserve it.
1st Jan 2020 5:41pm
Ouch... Sorry to hear about her. I wish you the best in this new year! :)
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Feb 2024 3:45pm
3rd Jan 2020 2:10pm
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10th Jan 2020 7:25pm
THE LAST ROSE PETAL
The last rose petal finally fell
From the nasty evil love spell
That you were under,
never unable to expell
as weakness left you speechless
Not letting you unveil
Your mind was trapped
deep in skies numbing thunder....
You couldn't see or even tell...
That you were blinded upon
On beautiful eyes that only would despise
That someone......
that crumbled you through hell...
But the punishment is over and gone...
No more pain no more tears,
no longer lies as it disappears...
Relieving your heart,
you can now part to make a new start
as slowly it heals and gives you new feels..
Exposing the dirty black drains
Let it stream away as it rains...
You are free, just let the past be...
For one day true love will be your destiny....
WRITTEN JANUARY 10, 2020
AUTHOR NANCY RDZ LL
Hope this little poem I made ya helps hun..
Smile 🙂❤
The last rose petal finally fell
From the nasty evil love spell
That you were under,
never unable to expell
as weakness left you speechless
Not letting you unveil
Your mind was trapped
deep in skies numbing thunder....
You couldn't see or even tell...
That you were blinded upon
On beautiful eyes that only would despise
That someone......
that crumbled you through hell...
But the punishment is over and gone...
No more pain no more tears,
no longer lies as it disappears...
Relieving your heart,
you can now part to make a new start
as slowly it heals and gives you new feels..
Exposing the dirty black drains
Let it stream away as it rains...
You are free, just let the past be...
For one day true love will be your destiny....
WRITTEN JANUARY 10, 2020
AUTHOR NANCY RDZ LL
Hope this little poem I made ya helps hun..
Smile 🙂❤
10th Jan 2020 8:26pm
10th Jan 2020 11:30pm
5th Feb 2020 6:55am
Anonymous
11th Feb 2020 1:10am
Flowed like a bitter song, brilliantly penned. I loved the third and last stanzas the most. Have definitely been there. Job well done here
19th Jul 2020 10:24pm
Kinda repeating what the others said above, but... Great job. So raw and visceral. I admire you for sharing this depth of darkness and pain -And being able to do it so well.
I Love This!! -->"Tangled up together
In a relentless knot.
Pain was your
Sickening Purpose."
I Love This!! -->"Tangled up together
In a relentless knot.
Pain was your
Sickening Purpose."
27th Aug 2020 4:59am
*This* is well written
The rest is overall well done...
Pay attention here to your rhyme and words ,
as they are well phrased in their construct !
"Use my heart and rape it!
Fuck my trust and break it!
You know it should be a crime!
For what you do to me inside!
I can no longer take it
Use my heart and rape it"
The rest is overall well done...
Pay attention here to your rhyme and words ,
as they are well phrased in their construct !
"Use my heart and rape it!
Fuck my trust and break it!
You know it should be a crime!
For what you do to me inside!
I can no longer take it
Use my heart and rape it"
27th Aug 2020 7:56pm
8th Sep 2020 1:55pm
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