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Beneath
Forever living The pain
Why does my heart still ache
In absence
you still haunt my mind
Insane
Even though the love has died
I need to walk away
watch you fade
Healthy Distance forever
But I’m chained beneath you
Your unaware
But we’re stuck together
you left me to starve
In the darkness
Beneath your future
You live your dream
While I live my nightmare
With undone sutures
I remain
Beneath you.
Why does my heart still ache
In absence
you still haunt my mind
Insane
Even though the love has died
I need to walk away
watch you fade
Healthy Distance forever
But I’m chained beneath you
Your unaware
But we’re stuck together
you left me to starve
In the darkness
Beneath your future
You live your dream
While I live my nightmare
With undone sutures
I remain
Beneath you.
Published 16th Dec 2019
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16th Dec 2019 3:44pm
"You live your dream
While I live my nightmare"
I felt that, awesome write x
While I live my nightmare"
I felt that, awesome write x
16th Dec 2019 4:06pm
17th Dec 2019 8:57pm
18th Dec 2019 00:59am
18th Dec 2019 3:53pm
so sad!
only if I knew how to keep myself at a healthy distance (of heart)
gosh
being beneath really sucks.....
H
only if I knew how to keep myself at a healthy distance (of heart)
gosh
being beneath really sucks.....
H
18th Dec 2019 4:02pm
Definitely:( it’s such a gamble giving yourself to someone in full
It truly is a nightmare.
It truly is a nightmare.
22nd Dec 2019 6:15am
It really isn't fun feeling all alone, but you are not alone. Others can relate to your heartbreaking words.
22nd Dec 2019 9:17pm
25th Dec 2019 4:36pm
This is really heartfelt...
Moving on is tough, as the person becomes a part of our lives and routines after awhile. I wish you the best, jigg!
Oh, and Merry Christmas!
Moving on is tough, as the person becomes a part of our lives and routines after awhile. I wish you the best, jigg!
Oh, and Merry Christmas!
25th Dec 2019 4:39pm
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27th Dec 2019 6:45am
The song comes to mind, “Haunt Me” by Sade. That struggle is tough- whether to invest further in a trouble relationship or terminate it.
9th Jan 2020 10:09pm
11th Feb 2020 5:23am
Amazing piece definitely feeling it sometimes they take hold and never really let go even when their gone.
27th May 2020 11:15pm
You can definitely feel the pain and heartbreak. The emotion is felt throughout, it's sad but I really enjoyed it.
24th Feb 2023 12:07pm
