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falling from the sky
the eyes of condors
dart about feverishly
as men and vermin
pray. the sun lays
red across the face
of morning
and there is coffee,
smokes and mute
conversation for
the newly dead,
but no laughter
is allowed
ice on words
skate past
knowledge
and into blind
dog rage
and cruelty
my heart has
never held a
rose so close
that i have
understood it's
meaning, but
i understand
the cigar in my
mouth and tears
and the words of
great philosopher's
are iodine and salt
on our open wounds
the luckiest day of
our life cannot equal
the miseries held
in the paws of
a mouse
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Re. falling from the sky
19th Dec 2019 2:57pm
beautiful Kitty I feel the desolation here
the utter loneliness of it all
I'm feeling much the same today...
love & hugs...
Brenda ❤
the utter loneliness of it all
I'm feeling much the same today...
love & hugs...
Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. falling from the sky
19th Dec 2019 2:59pm
Re. falling from the sky
19th Dec 2019 4:58pm
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19th Dec 2019 5:03pm
Re. falling from the sky
19th Dec 2019 6:27pm
Well stated, kittyB...with rhythms poetic...and great empathy...you have made a very fine piece here...evocative...
and thank goodness, just the right amount of words...ya done good kitty dear...hugs... Ely
and thank goodness, just the right amount of words...ya done good kitty dear...hugs... Ely
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Re: Re. falling from the sky
19th Dec 2019 8:23pm
Re. falling from the sky
19th Dec 2019 11:16pm
The more the deliberate destruction and cruelty in the world, the more of a challenge it is to process it all and stay reasonably sane (never mind upbeat). I can feel this one.
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Re: Re. falling from the sky
19th Dec 2019 11:21pm
Re. falling from the sky
19th Dec 2019 11:31pm
Some time in the desert brings things into the clear light...and the light can only emerge from the darkness. Such a powerful and terrible beauty is your ink Kitty.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
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Re: Re. falling from the sky
20th Dec 2019 1:19am
Thank you so much Harry. These are terrible times. The worlds gone mad.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. falling from the sky
20th Dec 2019 3:53am
Dear BK,
This piece certainly puts in order feelings of despair. This stanza in particular has nabbed my attention “my heart has
never held a
rose so close
that i have
understood it's
meaning, but
i understand
the cigar in my
mouth and tears ” I am admiring greatly the the visual this has conjured and the sharp feeling to me of knowing something claimed to be beautiful and yet I can’t/won’t see it. Intense and excellent write! H🌷
This piece certainly puts in order feelings of despair. This stanza in particular has nabbed my attention “my heart has
never held a
rose so close
that i have
understood it's
meaning, but
i understand
the cigar in my
mouth and tears ” I am admiring greatly the the visual this has conjured and the sharp feeling to me of knowing something claimed to be beautiful and yet I can’t/won’t see it. Intense and excellent write! H🌷
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Re: Re. falling from the sky
20th Dec 2019 11:00am
Thank you my dear Honoria. Your words do my honor.
Hope all is well with you.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
Hope all is well with you.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. falling from the sky
20th Dec 2019 12:49pm
how you bring in the pain & pain & pain of it all...in such enagaing beauty..there's something very organic & nostalgic & a chaos that moves composes us naturally..capturing that exact moment right into unto it, above & beyond too....in all of your flowing verses shared.. i loved how Harry described your works as terrible beauty ...& how Honoria says you put in order the despair... its a great pleasure to read your works so digging the truths...shine on , light & love bk:)
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Re: Re. falling from the sky
20th Dec 2019 2:46pm
Thank you uma. I am unworthy of such praise.
Hope everything is good in your world.
luv's,
buddhakitty.
Hope everything is good in your world.
luv's,
buddhakitty.