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Christmas of ‘86
Each Thanksgiving
a Christmas Wish insert
sponsored by the United Way
accompanies our county's newspaper
It's an opportunity for local ‘Angels'
to ease less-fortunate suffering
Nothing out of the ordinary
appeared from previous years—
a meal, groceries, clothes, toys
firewood, an affordable home
help with utilities, a car
and so forth
until the request
by an eight-year-old boy
"A Bicycle Repair Kit"
He wasn’t wishing
for a brand new bicycle;
but, a $2.00 repair kit
to fix his old one’s flat
I wasn’t sure
what to think of that—
was he appreciative
for what he had;
or, just taking care
of what he owned—
perhaps he was afraid
to ask for more
because he felt
he hadn’t been good—
maybe he'd been taught
the quality of age;
things aren't made
like they were, after all
I thought of Solomon
who could've asked for anything
his heart desired—
but, wished only for wisdom
to lead God's people instead;
yet was gifted all things
beyond his imagining
because of humility
Regardless, a new bike
replete with repair kit
is what this kid deserved—
anonymously, of course;
because Angels should remain just that:
The Spirit of Christmas in disguise
miracles whose only name is Love—
proving the humble are worthy
of so much more
than imagined possible
or even wished for
~
a Christmas Wish insert
sponsored by the United Way
accompanies our county's newspaper
It's an opportunity for local ‘Angels'
to ease less-fortunate suffering
Nothing out of the ordinary
appeared from previous years—
a meal, groceries, clothes, toys
firewood, an affordable home
help with utilities, a car
and so forth
until the request
by an eight-year-old boy
"A Bicycle Repair Kit"
He wasn’t wishing
for a brand new bicycle;
but, a $2.00 repair kit
to fix his old one’s flat
I wasn’t sure
what to think of that—
was he appreciative
for what he had;
or, just taking care
of what he owned—
perhaps he was afraid
to ask for more
because he felt
he hadn’t been good—
maybe he'd been taught
the quality of age;
things aren't made
like they were, after all
I thought of Solomon
who could've asked for anything
his heart desired—
but, wished only for wisdom
to lead God's people instead;
yet was gifted all things
beyond his imagining
because of humility
Regardless, a new bike
replete with repair kit
is what this kid deserved—
anonymously, of course;
because Angels should remain just that:
The Spirit of Christmas in disguise
miracles whose only name is Love—
proving the humble are worthy
of so much more
than imagined possible
or even wished for
~
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 3rd Dec 2019
| Edited 10th Dec 2023
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Re. Christmas of ‘86
3rd Dec 2019 6:59pm
This spill touched me to the point of causing my eyes to leak.......
I hate crying this early in the day. (You need to warn a sensitive guy)
I hate crying this early in the day. (You need to warn a sensitive guy)
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That's a great compliment coming from a Polar Bear! Thanks, Jess! May your family have the happiest of Holiday Seasons! ❤️
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7th Dec 2019 4:31am
Thank you! You too. I adore your gifting spirit. It really shines in your poetry and it's a great example for younger women like me. I have a funny way of becoming inarticulate at times... it tends to go with a rushed mindset. I wasn't rushing when I read it. (I'm not rushing now, either.) But in a heartbeat it could all fall apart. It feels really calm right now. I like to slow down and drink that in when it happens for 5 whole minutes or longer.
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Re. Christmas of ‘86
3rd Dec 2019 7:32pm
Well, HI,
another angle to it, is to be attached to something or somewon,
for example, if his sister broke her tooth it would be perfectly understandable
to ask for a new tooth for her, but not a new sister!!!! Ha Ha Ha.
another angle to it, is to be attached to something or somewon,
for example, if his sister broke her tooth it would be perfectly understandable
to ask for a new tooth for her, but not a new sister!!!! Ha Ha Ha.
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There are always more angles than we can think possible! The actual angle to this story ( because we're given a number to call when we select the wish ) was that a neighbor's parents gave the little boy their son's old bike because he was getting a new one for Christmas. It had a flat and a few other things that needed touched up.
So he got a new one too! May you and your new wife have the happiest of Holiday Seasons, Rabbit Rabbit! ❤
So he got a new one too! May you and your new wife have the happiest of Holiday Seasons, Rabbit Rabbit! ❤
Re. Christmas of ‘86
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2019 7:42pm
There's a few subtle rhymes in here that help propel along the read, though it is so engaging that such was not even necessary.
"a meal, groceries, clothes, [toys]
firewood, an affordable home
help with utilities, a car
and so forth—
until the request
by an eight year-old [boy]—
"A Repair Kit"
He wasn’t wishing
for a brand new bicycle;
but, a $2.00 repair kit
to fix his old one’s [flat]
I wasn’t sure
what to think of [that]—"
It's a heart warming poem badly needed this time of year to remind us that sometimes it is better to wish for something as simple as it is believable rather than complex accompanied with a host of doubt.
Back in 86, I'm pretty certain most boys were wishing for gas powered mini-bikes, snow mobiles, etc.
It takes a lot to ask for something, because it often perceived as an admittance to self incapability, same as in asking for help when you feel you should be accomplishing a task yourself. Americans are often split over the issue of giving; there is mass perpetuated perception that those not making an effort are lazy and asking for handouts.
The humble don't make demands for more than their hands can receive.
If only there were more angels like those mentioned in this poem.
❤📝🌲
"a meal, groceries, clothes, [toys]
firewood, an affordable home
help with utilities, a car
and so forth—
until the request
by an eight year-old [boy]—
"A Repair Kit"
He wasn’t wishing
for a brand new bicycle;
but, a $2.00 repair kit
to fix his old one’s [flat]
I wasn’t sure
what to think of [that]—"
It's a heart warming poem badly needed this time of year to remind us that sometimes it is better to wish for something as simple as it is believable rather than complex accompanied with a host of doubt.
Back in 86, I'm pretty certain most boys were wishing for gas powered mini-bikes, snow mobiles, etc.
It takes a lot to ask for something, because it often perceived as an admittance to self incapability, same as in asking for help when you feel you should be accomplishing a task yourself. Americans are often split over the issue of giving; there is mass perpetuated perception that those not making an effort are lazy and asking for handouts.
The humble don't make demands for more than their hands can receive.
If only there were more angels like those mentioned in this poem.
❤📝🌲
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There are definitely more angels out there who are easing this holiday season for many people and families, particularly the elderly and children ( as it should be ). My son was only four and my daughter two that Christmas, neither really comprehended to ask for things at that age; they just knew Santa was coming!
I remember Santa asking my son what he wanted when we had photos made; and my son looked at him perplexed! But, yeah, when he was eight-years-old, he was asking for a go-cart, I believe!
Thank you for always loving, supporting, and believe in me. Christmas is so much more beautiful with you in it! ❤📝🌲
I remember Santa asking my son what he wanted when we had photos made; and my son looked at him perplexed! But, yeah, when he was eight-years-old, he was asking for a go-cart, I believe!
Thank you for always loving, supporting, and believe in me. Christmas is so much more beautiful with you in it! ❤📝🌲
Re. Christmas of ‘86
3rd Dec 2019 9:44pm
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6th Dec 2019 2:58pm
Re. Christmas of ‘86
3rd Dec 2019 10:52pm
I think '86 is back on trend - repair shops are popping up everywhere, countering the throwaway society mentality.
I like the idea that what we wish for (or imagine is possible) can actually be less than what some other route in life would lead us to.
The way you tell, Ahavati, as always is wondrous.
I like the idea that what we wish for (or imagine is possible) can actually be less than what some other route in life would lead us to.
The way you tell, Ahavati, as always is wondrous.
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6th Dec 2019 2:59pm
I agree we should always take care of what we have ( or at least that's what I was taught ). Thank you for a wondrous comment, Josh! Happiest of Holiday Seasons to you and yours! ❤
Re. Christmas of ‘86
4th Dec 2019 00:03am
How wonderful! I like adopting a family for christmas it the nicest thing someone can do, making strangers smile.
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nikki, somehow I knew you were that type! Thank you, my friend! Much appreciated. Have the happiest of holiday seasons! ❤
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2019 1:58am
Wow Avahati........this is breathtaking........beautiful heart hugging ink........imagine if we could all wish with an unselfish heart......luv this.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Dec 2019 3:02pm
Thank you, Purpled-One! There is much to be learned from children ( if we would but learn and remember ). Much Purple Love and Blessings to you this holiday season, my friend! ❤
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4th Dec 2019 12:07pm
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6th Dec 2019 3:02pm
Re. Christmas of ‘86
4th Dec 2019 5:03pm
what moves me most is the child's request... it's like a point of light, of steadiness, that connects the years gone by to the current times and speaks of character. that it has me wondering about the child's homelife, his possible reasons (as you address) for asking for that rather than something grander, the value of that bike to him... does his family rely on some small income (like a paper round) from his use of his bike? is it just that the bike's important to his pleasure, or is it vital for his ability to attend school?
a beautiful poem, wrapping the reader in the deeper meaning of christmas gifting and allowing the reader space to become involved. nice sound-links throughout, both ear and 'eye'-rhymes that roll off your pen (or fingertips) as naturally as water over a fall.
a beautiful poem, wrapping the reader in the deeper meaning of christmas gifting and allowing the reader space to become involved. nice sound-links throughout, both ear and 'eye'-rhymes that roll off your pen (or fingertips) as naturally as water over a fall.
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Re: Re. Christmas of ‘86
6th Dec 2019 3:04pm
Thank you, butters! I explained the story to rabbit's comment above. I loved that the parents were teaching the little boy to be grateful for what he received. They couldn't afford the repair kit themselves, so encouraged him to ask.
Children are so precious and remind us of what's important if we would just listen and remember.
I appreciate your comment and presence, butters! Happiest of Holiday seasons to you and yours! ❤
Children are so precious and remind us of what's important if we would just listen and remember.
I appreciate your comment and presence, butters! Happiest of Holiday seasons to you and yours! ❤
Re. Christmas of ‘86
4th Dec 2019 8:50pm
Such a heartwarming piece, made me smile big.
I’m sure many could learn from the lesson this young boy taught by example... 😊👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
I’m sure many could learn from the lesson this young boy taught by example... 😊👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
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Re: Re. Christmas of ‘86
6th Dec 2019 3:05pm
Thank you, PoeticOne, my friend! I hope you have the happiest of holiday seasons this year! ❤
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6th Dec 2019 8:38pm
Re. Christmas of ‘86
4th Dec 2019 9:06pm
beautiful Vati this is lovely reminder of what is to be valued
your observances of the boy just as wonderful
as the heart of the boy himself...
love Brenda ❤
your observances of the boy just as wonderful
as the heart of the boy himself...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. Christmas of ‘86
6th Dec 2019 3:07pm
Thank you, Sweet Brenda! I hope you have the happiest of Holidays filled with much love and many blessings, this season! ❤
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6th Dec 2019 3:16pm
Re. Christmas of ‘86
4th Dec 2019 9:25pm
I love this poem for many wonderful reasons A...but what hit me is the difference the way our "Consumer Culture" has changed all of us...once upon a time we repaired the things we love...now we have been programmed to chuck it on the scrapheap and buy...buy...buy...it must be something new. Great ink my friend...and muchly needed.
Everything is happening all at once....Harry
Everything is happening all at once....Harry
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6th Dec 2019 3:10pm
Exactly, Harry! In this case, as I explained to Rabbit, this was a second hand bike a neighbor's parents had gifted the boy because their son was getting a new one. Aside from the tire there were a few other nits that needed attention ( a petal, the seat, etc. ), so we opted to purchase him a new one along with the repair kit so he could learn the value of repairing something.
Consumerism is an addiction as devastating as any other addiction, isn't it, my friend?
I hope you and your lovely family have the happiest of holidays with tons of love and blessings! ❤
Consumerism is an addiction as devastating as any other addiction, isn't it, my friend?
I hope you and your lovely family have the happiest of holidays with tons of love and blessings! ❤
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7th Dec 2019 6:23am
A disease it is Ahavati...my wife and I have a rule, we can spend no more than $20 and they must be purchased from the Goodwill or Salvo Stores.
You and your loved ones have a wonderful Festive Season my friend.
You and your loved ones have a wonderful Festive Season my friend.
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Re. Christmas of ‘86
6th Dec 2019 7:17am
Dear A,
This reminds me of a show called The House Without A Christmas Tree. Mind you, there is absolutely no correlation here other than the heroine of the show only wants a christmas tree for christmas. It’s the simple want/need in both of these works that renders the most meaning for me and gives me pause to appreciate even more. Exquisite write. H🌷
This reminds me of a show called The House Without A Christmas Tree. Mind you, there is absolutely no correlation here other than the heroine of the show only wants a christmas tree for christmas. It’s the simple want/need in both of these works that renders the most meaning for me and gives me pause to appreciate even more. Exquisite write. H🌷
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6th Dec 2019 3:12pm
Awww. That is precious, Honoria! Just asking for the symbolism of the season is so childlike and innocent in nature. She just wanted to admire the beauty of the season vs receive consumeristic things.
Thank you for sharing. My you and yours have the happiest of Holiday seasons! ❤
Thank you for sharing. My you and yours have the happiest of Holiday seasons! ❤
Re. Christmas of ‘86
6th Dec 2019 7:29pm
Heart warming, full of hope and good wishes. I'm assuming your read this some 33 years ago and it stuck with you. The Holidays should inspire folks to do good not just during the season but throughout the year.
Your piece just brings in an overall good feeling, hope for our future.
Thank you for sharing.
Your piece just brings in an overall good feeling, hope for our future.
Thank you for sharing.
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6th Dec 2019 7:32pm
Thanks, Wally. Much appreciated. Yes; it did stick with me. It was different than the typical request and contained the true spirit of Christmas to me.
No other wish moved me as much before or since that one.
I appreciate you and hope your holidays are blessed with much love and happiness!
No other wish moved me as much before or since that one.
I appreciate you and hope your holidays are blessed with much love and happiness!
Re. Christmas of ‘86
7th Dec 2019 11:28pm
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Re. Christmas of ‘86
8th Dec 2019 3:34am
I can really relate to this, since I had to give my beloved bike to my younger sister in order to get a new one when i was outgrowing it. Sometimes, you have to give to get, maybe always. Being still attached to the old one, I made a deal that she could ride my new one some of the time and we could swap. It worked, and when my other younger sister caught on to it, they were riding both bikes when i was on my new roller skates. If only everything had such simple solutions as kid stuff but that's why we need Christmas angels to remind us :)
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8th Dec 2019 12:55pm
Thank you for sharing that, PR! You must have really good parents for them to have instilled such ethos into their girls! I do hope your holiday season is blessed with much love and happiness! xo