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Distant
Distant
Distant from others
Distant from myself
Alienated
Like I’m no longer me
I’m just in this body
This body that’s not mine
Walking, eating, working, sleeping
The same cycle over and over
I’m at a standstill... you know?
I’m not currently living
Just... surviving
Distant from others
Distant from myself
Alienated
Like I’m no longer me
I’m just in this body
This body that’s not mine
Walking, eating, working, sleeping
The same cycle over and over
I’m at a standstill... you know?
I’m not currently living
Just... surviving
Published 20th Nov 2019
Author's Note
This poem is about a phase I went through when I stopped feeling. It was beyond sadness. I was just... numb.
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20th Nov 2019 1:12am
20th Nov 2019 2:22am
I’m hoping you have been feeling better about yourself since then, and that writing will be a cathartic plus for you. You’re on the right site now.
—Jade
—Jade
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- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
20th Nov 2019 7:16pm
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22nd Nov 2019 5:42pm
i find myself in this type of state of thinking........feeling.......being
from time to time and sleep and being alone in nature are my Healing tools.
Hopefully You have found (developed) positive tools to enable Healing.
Spilling aloud for others to read and share their thoughts with You is a great tool, as well.
Keep spilling
from time to time and sleep and being alone in nature are my Healing tools.
Hopefully You have found (developed) positive tools to enable Healing.
Spilling aloud for others to read and share their thoughts with You is a great tool, as well.
Keep spilling
26th Nov 2019 3:36pm
Beautiful.Poetry gives and opportunity for others to understand what you are going through.
What are the things that elevate your spirit and make you feel alive?
write and dwell on them.
What are the things that elevate your spirit and make you feel alive?
write and dwell on them.
