Joro

Impressive piece of poetry, I wish I knew how to critique 😂 I just know what I like and this pretty good.

Too Kind, I told Ya :) Flowery lol
Appreciate You Nikk

I have the back 40 one would say in my yard. I live for it. Its peaceful and calming and for me, thats always a welcoming feeling. Love this sweetie.

Tis peace, I've seen many acres disappear here, yet I was able to save many, for that I am grateful.
As I am for Your Kindness and RL ML-Very kind to me You always are!!!

Simply gorgeous, brother Soul.

Appreciate the visit Jade and Honoured by the RL.
You are very kind, I almost sneered too much and wasn't going to post....sigh I can never look too long, the more I look at my Writes I see whats wrong or better to do lol

Ah yes, I understand completely.  I’ve written poetry since a child, and so I’ve had many moments like that ever since. I’m my own worst critic, and I’m always doing revisions or small edits.  To me it seems a natural tendency.  So don’t beat yourself up too much.

And your most welcome.

Jade🐾

A beautiful tribute, on my list the moment I read it the first time.

Kathy

You are so very Kind Kathy-TY :)
Grateful for the RL and Comment!!!
I like the mainframe idea for this lil ditty, but I could have changed a few things....too late lol

I'm sorry, is it too late"

Oyes...I'll never touch it again lol
Different day different energy ...so if anything it'll be a new Write/subject/emotion

Ah yes dear Soul, I comprehend the dynamic shift based on time's passage.

I feel intense...this prayer this anthem ...of Preservance ..of Harmony ..with the ever-perseverance Nature ...Us in the lap of Her ..inspite of all the ravages of time & rancours of ongoing generations & rancid airs in the fogginess...the Larger Divinity comes through..the Goodness the Nature the Co-existence with Her..seems undeniably the unwritten Eternity...Your Verdant Verses are Classic in Expressions as Ever & beyond any analysis of this me :) could only adore & take the pure nectatrine essenceyou verse in them so artistically & selflessly, Soul Poet..Respects, Light & Love..Shine on :)

You are too good to me Uma , Thank You for such Kindness!!!
Yes very much a prayer, I will be foreve of the woods and Nature.
She is my balm and that statue of protection ...what a Wonderful and exact expression of that love/care...It was easy inspiration.

The peace and tranquility that is part N parcel of Nature is my place of balance.

Cities grab hold of my excitement and high energy or inquisitive side, where as Nature will always be my focus and center...If/when I am within the cradle of it...I am at a feeling of whole/calm and happiness  



****Had to add to this, hope You see Uma...

Meant to say Hugs and Thank You-Be Good To Yourself!!!

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yes and more yesses

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I heart you darling,  mine..

You Spoil Me


TY

A few lines have special resonance for me including:

No total amnesty Her eyes and Ours belong entwine  
sign of time, before... so after “

I'm so glad a cpl lines grabbed You Ted, I need those lyrical moments tucked in somewhere-Appreciate You!!!

I love what Uma had to say about your write. There is a sublime emanation of spiritual clarity, of humble awareness, that permeates these lines. I've been over it several times and I find perusing it to be a calming and enriching experience. Namaste.

Appreciate seeing You here Daniel!!!
Your words mean much Good Sir-Spiritual humbleness
Tis the focus used for this Write.
Thankful this was a calming experience!!!

I really enjoyed this beautiful poem... A talented writer you are :)

Thank You for such kindness, I greatly appreciate Your read!!!