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sitting alone in some far off corner
when you write
poetry---
write like your neck is in a
noose and flames are shooting
out of your ass
when you write
poetry---
write like you are punching
your way through a brick
wall to rip the heart out of
whoever is standing on the
other side
when you write
poetry---
write like you're driving a
nail through the hand
of Christ
when you write
poetry---
write like you only have
minutes to live and the
last words will show the
real meaning of beauty
to eternity
when you write
poetry---
write like your pen is filled
with a thousand poisonous
spiders
when you write
poetry---
write in a scream about
life
death
terror
joy
salvation
damnation
the empty bottle
the broken heart
the broken bottle
the empty heart
when you write
poetry---
do not worry about being
perfect because it's more
fun to get dirty than be
perfect
when you write
poetry---
don't concern yourself
with style
if you write long enough
style will find you even
if that style is no style
at all
when you write
poetry---
write
when you write
poetry---
write like a naked
savage running,
hunting in the rain,
waiting to pick raw
meat from in between
your teeth after a kill
when you write
poetry---
write sitting alone in
some far off corner,
away from the dead
and the insane that
surround you, and
look for answers to
questions that no one
has dared yet to ask
...now that is
writting
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30th Oct 2019 2:06am
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Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 5:55pm
Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
some people say writing is a lonely pursuit,
but not if you're chasing down every word ..
but not if you're chasing down every word ..
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Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 5:57pm
You nailed it right on the head Paul. I never feel alone. Always good to hear from you.
cheers,
buddhakitty.
cheers,
buddhakitty.
Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 7:54am
Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 5:58pm
Thank you so much. I'm pleaed you found something meaningful in it.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
Anonymous
30th Oct 2019 11:16am
You would do well to break this up and publish the individuals pieces; they stand alone independent and strong.

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Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 12:03pm
Thank you Mr Blaze. That's an idea to consider. I want you to know how much i appreciate your presence on DUP.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
Anonymous
30th Oct 2019 2:01pm
Very kind of you, BK. Your work is always a refreshing pleasure to read.

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Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 5:40pm
that's work...
there's a whole LOT to unpack, even in each piece... it's a bit overwhelming to read as a whole (just for me), since i'm still reeling from previous lines and less able to absorb the brilliance of the next.
as a series of shorts? my brain could take that in easier.
as to the content, bk, supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!
there's a whole LOT to unpack, even in each piece... it's a bit overwhelming to read as a whole (just for me), since i'm still reeling from previous lines and less able to absorb the brilliance of the next.
as a series of shorts? my brain could take that in easier.
as to the content, bk, supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!
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Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 6:00pm
WOW! Thats a lotta praise in one word butters. Thank you.
humble hugs,
buddhakitty.
humble hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 2:14pm
Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 6:01pm
Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
Well now... this is something new from you...
good stuff b-kitty... and well said...
I agree with John-B...each piece of the whole...can stand alone...
on its own...in and of itself...
Positively prolific, Poet...well said...hugs, Ely
PS...very last word in your beautiful piece... I think your finger slipped...there be an extra ( t ) in writing...hugs, Ely
good stuff b-kitty... and well said...
I agree with John-B...each piece of the whole...can stand alone...
on its own...in and of itself...
Positively prolific, Poet...well said...hugs, Ely
PS...very last word in your beautiful piece... I think your finger slipped...there be an extra ( t ) in writing...hugs, Ely
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Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
Thanks for the kind words Ely. Always a joy to hear from you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 6:07pm
Several aspects of vocational passion all rolled into one. I agree with JB to tease out the poem and make each stanza count more - readers might like to savor each one without being distracted by more on the page. 10 tests of authentic authorship.
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Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 6:40pm
I couldn't have said it better, so, I'll just agree with you...wholeheartedly... Señor Josh...
You, B-K...you ¡rock! today...hugs and kisses for you... Ely
You, B-K...you ¡rock! today...hugs and kisses for you... Ely
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Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
30th Oct 2019 9:49pm
Now this is Beat Poetry...this is Lerner crashing headlong into d. a. levy....Bukowski knocking back another beer before telling the crowd to shut the fuck up before launching into Love is a dog from hell...awesome poem Kitty...awesome!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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30th Oct 2019 11:01pm
Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
31st Oct 2019 8:05pm
Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
31st Oct 2019 9:28pm
Thank you Jofec. Go for it! Write whatever is inside of you.
hug,
buddhakitty
hug,
buddhakitty
Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
31st Oct 2019 8:18pm
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31st Oct 2019 9:29pm
Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
1st Nov 2019 1:40am
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1st Nov 2019 1:52am
Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
1st Nov 2019 5:01pm
Re: Re. sitting alone in some far off corner
1st Nov 2019 6:51pm
Thank you monkeyman. It does carry that kind of screaming quality to it
hugs,
buddhakitty
hugs,
buddhakitty