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about my writing
a trickster,
slight of
hand
a carnival
barker
a street
performer
passing the
hat around
a pedestrian
running madly
against the light
on a crowded
street
raindrops falling
into mud
four flat tires
dadaism
fleas on the head of
a dead monkey
the joke with no
punch line
randomness on
it's last legs
a poisoned
apple
a wounded spirit
looking for a
place to
land
left handed
scissors
a cat with its fur
up and claws
out
bullshit,
dogshit,
any shit
laughing,
thinking it could
be anything
else
Published 20th Oct 2019
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20th Oct 2019 1:26pm
20th Oct 2019 1:56pm
20th Oct 2019 3:52pm
* slap *
Some people need hugs, you need a periodic slap. Though I understand your view ( I have it myself at times ), I can assure you your writing is anything but shit. Though I think a poem about fleas on a monkey's head would be interesting. Hell, I challenge you to write one about every aspect of your writing you've mentioned. Prove it - put your purr where your pen is, Kitts. :D
Some people need hugs, you need a periodic slap. Though I understand your view ( I have it myself at times ), I can assure you your writing is anything but shit. Though I think a poem about fleas on a monkey's head would be interesting. Hell, I challenge you to write one about every aspect of your writing you've mentioned. Prove it - put your purr where your pen is, Kitts. :D
20th Oct 2019 4:02pm
Ha! What a challenge. As everything i write is completely random, i will see what i can do. (Your the coolest).
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
20th Oct 2019 3:57pm
i've heard a lot of people speak about the aspects of their writing, but none so originally (and visually striking) as you have here. i could eat your writing to the last crumb and come back asking for more!
20th Oct 2019 5:18pm
Ha! Thanks butters. You better have some peanut butter to go with it.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
20th Oct 2019 4:27pm
20th Oct 2019 5:19pm
20th Oct 2019 8:01pm
20th Oct 2019 9:50pm
With that list, looks like you've got plenty of fuel for the fire - strong sparky out-of-the-box brain-storm-crash-thinking.
"Four flat tyres" and
"a wounded spirit
looking for a
place to
land "
appeal to me a good starting points :))
"Four flat tyres" and
"a wounded spirit
looking for a
place to
land "
appeal to me a good starting points :))
20th Oct 2019 9:57pm
Random thoughts of mine...lol. That the way i view my writing.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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21st Oct 2019 2:23am
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21st Oct 2019 2:40am
My humble thanks BB. Your kind words are far more than i deserve.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
21st Oct 2019 2:46am
hugs you beautiful Kitty we are all of us wounded souls in a way
you are too hard on yourself you show so much kindness to everyone you touch
even to me and I'm not an easy person to like...
your writing here is important because you do two things
first allow your soul wings and second take flight into our hearts connecting with us
you are truly beautiful and so is your writing because all of it is you...
love & hugs...
Brenda 🌹
you are too hard on yourself you show so much kindness to everyone you touch
even to me and I'm not an easy person to like...
your writing here is important because you do two things
first allow your soul wings and second take flight into our hearts connecting with us
you are truly beautiful and so is your writing because all of it is you...
love & hugs...
Brenda 🌹
