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Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
The wheel-horse, wilful and eager
dragged the cart with its hard seats
and heavy wrought-iron frame over the bumpy track
up the windswept hill while the witches
stuffed wadding under their bony bottoms
to soften the jarring bounces
thinking to worship the weaver
who, grinning, offered his new ware,
a cape from spun gold for a high price of sacrifice
but the witches with a wry smile
had also brought with them a wreath
and suddenly switched plans.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 8th Oct 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Comp entry for Through the Alphabet: the Letter "W", hosted by MadameLavender
(photo credit: Joshua Bond, taken at The Eden Project, Cornwall, U.K)
(photo credit: Joshua Bond, taken at The Eden Project, Cornwall, U.K)
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Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
8th Oct 2019 12:28pm
Re: Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
18th Oct 2019 11:51pm
Thank you BK; the main witch this year is our previous Prime-Minister setting up the Brexit mess for 31st October :))
Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
8th Oct 2019 12:41pm
Re: Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
18th Oct 2019 11:51pm
Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
8th Oct 2019 1:45pm
This is definitely a winning poem Josh, I didn't even notice all the words with letter W till the end because the weave and transition was seamless, beautifully crafted.
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Re: Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
18th Oct 2019 11:52pm
Re: Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
19th Oct 2019 00:23am
mmm, perhaps because i was one of the voters lol
Congratulations my friend, well deserving!
Congratulations my friend, well deserving!
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Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
8th Oct 2019 2:37pm
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18th Oct 2019 11:52pm
Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
9th Oct 2019 6:22am
Josh, you made this flow so effortlessly and befitting within the season too. Awesome write.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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18th Oct 2019 11:53pm
Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
9th Oct 2019 6:56am
Dear J,
I’ve been enjoying everyone’s spin on the Halloween writes. Yours is no exception. Creating around a theme can be challenging in and of itself but with only a letter?!
Fun and entertaining with a bit of spook mixed in. Excellent write and good luck in the comp. H 🌷
I’ve been enjoying everyone’s spin on the Halloween writes. Yours is no exception. Creating around a theme can be challenging in and of itself but with only a letter?!
Fun and entertaining with a bit of spook mixed in. Excellent write and good luck in the comp. H 🌷
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Re: Re. Rumpelstiltskin And The Witches
18th Oct 2019 11:55pm
Thank you H; sorry for the late reply - this page slipped off my radar 'till just now - but it means I can report your wishing me good luck in the comp worked a treat :))