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Haiku #31 ...time
day breaks sunny surf
gently sighs sands sing softly
swaying palms...still time
gently sighs sands sing softly
swaying palms...still time
Published 6th Oct 2019
| Edited 13th Oct 2019
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Written for Cafe Critique Comp 1
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6th Oct 2019 7:36pm
6th Oct 2019 7:51pm
Thank you , Silver... I am a fervent fan of the pleasures of alliteration...thank you for the positive feedback...much appreciated... Ely
6th Oct 2019 11:45pm
