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Maybe Next Time
She waited a lifetime
for absolutely nothing,
when death came
she grabbed its hand
and they danced away.
for absolutely nothing,
when death came
she grabbed its hand
and they danced away.
Author's Note
My photo. I had my friend paint a skull over Evitas face.
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Re. Maybe Next Time
30th Sep 2019 1:03pm
Re: Re. Maybe Next Time
30th Sep 2019 1:05pm
Re. Maybe Next Time
30th Sep 2019 3:22pm
First, awesome photo! Secondly, awesome verse! Sad, though, that some people spend their lives waiting for death because they feel there is nothing else.
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Re: Re. Maybe Next Time
30th Sep 2019 3:25pm
My favorite thing to say is I've spent my whole life surviving I don't even know what living is.
Thank you.
Thank you.
Re. Maybe Next Time
30th Sep 2019 4:25pm
Live?
Survive?
What's the diff? Just do it 'til thr big god-head says y'cain't any no mo'.
Survive?
What's the diff? Just do it 'til thr big god-head says y'cain't any no mo'.
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Re: Re. Maybe Next Time
30th Sep 2019 6:05pm
Re. Maybe Next Time
1st Oct 2019 2:20am
Drink more Jack...makes the dancing even more enjoyable lol. Nice ink indeed.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re. Maybe Next Time
2nd Oct 2019 6:48pm
Re. Maybe Next Time
16th Dec 2019 1:10am
There's some everything in that nothing grace. Empty space lets wheels turn. The empty center of the bowl is real useful for holding food. I respect your grim acceptance Scheherazade
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16th Dec 2019 1:23am