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Rhythm
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Rhythm
If a chord can lift a soul
A song a heart
Your voice will rend this world apart.
Written by
Fiftysevenhours
Published
30th Sep 2019
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Every time I hear from you the miles they just fall away
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#LongDistanceRelationship
#love
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Re. Rhythm
DanielChristensen
(The Fire Elemental)
30th Sep 2019 6:45pm
Beautiful. Wonderful, pointed brevity.
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Fiftysevenhours
1st Oct 2019 2:10am
Thank you for your kind words and the gift of brevity - new one for me. I always like looking at the history of a word. A curious one Brevitas, rearranged is just one letter from the truth.
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DanielChristensen
(The Fire Elemental)
1st Oct 2019 2:21am
Hm. Something to consider.
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NewBeginnings
1st Oct 2019 7:24am
Great message - beautifully expressed!Thanks for sharing :)
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Fiftysevenhours
5th Oct 2019 8:31pm
Glad you enjoyed thank you.
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mysteriouslady
6th Nov 2019 9:42pm
Simplicity and strength at its finest here. Love this. <3
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Fiftysevenhours
8th Nov 2019 11:01pm
Mysteriouslady, thank you.
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